Aw, I'm sorry you guys are all so angry at Heero. He just doesn't know any better. I'm trying to straighten the poor guy out. But at least you've all enjoyed the chapter, even if Heero did drive you crazy (maybe that's half the fun, eh?).
A/N: I seem to be on a bit of a roll with this one, but don't expect to be spoiled with daily updates. This is highly unusual for me! :roll: But I'll do my best to keep the love and angst coming. Enjoy! :heart: AE
Omnicat, your Relena needs to give my Relena lessons in how to get Heero to quit panicking over potentially bad scenarios and just confess his love already! ;) I looove this story. You should keep writing in first person, present tense; the immediacy works so well, it's addicting. :love: Good one ...
Give me an invitation, more than a guess Give me a sign with only one single breath I?ll give you an empty page This is the time and place What kind of truth lives in the absence of trust? What is the use of holding back on this much? My eyes are open ...
Omnicat, you've made Duo sound utterly irresistible. I definitely buy him with Relena; I even buy Heero with Dorothy and Trowa with Hilde (their military connection makes perfect sense for a coupling). And yes, there are a lot of descriptions here, but I love the way you make Relena's panicked mind ...
It's amazing how much you say in just 100 words. I would love for you to expand this, though; there just aren't enough good Trowa stories out there. Everyone could use more Trowa.
Is this ficcy going to be strictly exploratory of emotions and centered on their relationship, or will there be some action to spice up the drama and intensity? :)
When I started writing this, it was designed to be a character study. So far there's not much in the way of plot, but things will ...
0mikr0n, mi amigo... I should just turn over bits of this story to you entirely. Your lesson on bullets is very helpful! You should be pleased to know that I'm doing some research for chapter seven, talking with my policeman friend for some concrete details. As of right now, I cannot tell you what ...
Will the chapters keep coming out this quickly? :D
Ha! Probably not. I have some major story deadlines in the next two days. :cry: You see, I temporarily abandoned my original characters to revisit Heero, Relena and Wuffy, and that probably wasn't the best idea. But at least my BI buddies are ...