Blissful Ignorance

The title is fitting...Becoming ..meaning that the characters are perhaps becoming a different person altogether. Changing. That could explain for the slight change in their usual demeanour...with Relena being submissive in hopes of bringing back the Heero she knew and with Heero being abusive in an ...

woo finally! it's been posted ...this has been a long journey ...for you and your fans.but well worth the wait...now, on to the next chapter. Cheers!

This is such an awesome read. It's sweet, subtly humorous, and to the point. Keep it up!

YAY! The ending has just the right amount of fluff! It's so adorable how Heero admitted (at least to himself - or his subconscious...lol) that he likes 'snuggling' with Relena... *squeal* Awesome!

wahh I haven't read a GW fic in a while...school and work and stuff almost killed me..lol...Anyways, it's nice to be back and have something as good as this! Now, I'm on to part 2.. Keep it up!

yep ..more or less, it's a rambling but an insightful one at that.

Anyhow, as regards to the 'VOICE'. I was actually referring to the Active Voice and Passive Voice of forming a sentence. It's just English grammar technical stuff and whatnot...but it's kinda nice to know what it is. So, here's my ...

Omnicat,

..all that you've said..ditto! wow! It's just so interesting to be able to analyze what sort of writing style is effective for each character, particularly Heero and Relena. I've always had an inkling as to how they should sound like when giving their P.O.V.s but I never really dissected ...

I just love Heero's inner dialogue there when he asked or rather demanded her to marry him...lol... oh and what I always find difficult to pull off is to make Heero intentionally or unintentionally joke. Your version (the one in the end) is one of my faves! Keep writing! Cheers!

This is lovely and I can kinda relate. It is hard when one starts to doubt his/her own morality or even sanity! waahh...it's like, "Am I evil or not?" ...but then again, having little insecurities once in a while may not be so bad. It allows us to reassess ourselves and strive for improvement...that ...

yep I can't agree more. This fic needs to go on...FOREVER! yeeeee..umm..wait, I went a little overboard, didn't I? hmm, on the other hand, I really have to commend you on your superb writing style. You always seem to be able to balance the tenderness of the moment with Heero and Relena's ...