Every Breathless Whisper (Series) Lemon

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Every Breathless Whisper (Series) Lemon

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She loves him, and needs him, but doesn't know how to tell him. But a visit from Dorothy leaves her reeling when she's told the world doesn't see her as a woman or a human being with human desires.

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Post by Aieki Chan »

You are SO right! That was the best, in my POV the best lemon story ever! For now it fantastic, keep up the good work. :bounce: Make more fics and I hope more lemon fic from you will come out more! :D
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Good lemon!

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Good, GOOD, GOOD! :bounce: I really liked this fic! Very touching, yet steamy. Loved it! :-P
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Post by Shooting Gundam Star »

Love it! Pretty! Now look, you've made me cry. :bounce:

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Post by shadowcat »

*wipes away tear* Beautiful.........*breaks into sobs*

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Post by Wingnut »

I have loved this story for a long time, I think it was the first Wing lemon that I saved to my own hard drive so I could read it at anytime. It was, and still is, that good.
Although one wouldn't think that Dorothy would actively play matchmaker on a whim like that though.
And I loved the last line about the neglected report that likely will never be completed and filed.
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Post by Perfect Soldier »

Whether your story says anything about you I don't konw but I do know you wrote that lemon percectly. I just had to keep reading it over and over again, it was amazing.
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Post by NafX »

That was wonderful! *dreamy sigh*
But ... but .. is there MORE? :)
I think a 3rd chapter would be goooooodddd.... :)

Hmmm ... you're very good at this writing thing ... :)

Keep it coming!

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Post by Wingnut »

NafX wrote:I think a 3rd chapter would be goooooodddd.... :)~Nat.
Last time I checked, it was. Trust me you will not be dissapionted.
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Post by Mizaya »

:eek: I can't believe you of all people wrote such a steamy lemon! Wow! Ok, hold on, let me collect myself........ok, well I have to say that was really really really good. I loved how it was so IC and how id demanded for the reader to envision every little detail. Again, wow. I'm never letting you live this one down! Wow! Write more lemons, my friend, because you are surely talented at it! Hehe, I heart you!

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