Blissful Ignorance

Another good one - I like the way you're portraying Heero's mental and emotional state in the wake of his injuries and his anxieties about Relena's safety.

Also found the way he flinches when he realises he's bloodied Relena a good way to end that scene, as that's usually portrayed as one of his ...

It's good - although I'd labeled the out of body experiance as a fevour dream to start with, flowed well, can't see anything that needs pointing out.

Still want to see where you take this, it's a good read thus far.

Nice one - looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Cool fic, good opening.

Looking forward to seeing where you're taking this.

Lo AmberEyes, welcome to BI.

Hope you enjoy your stay.

Unfortunately - I can't think of anything to say but 'Cool, I can see this happening.'

So you'll have to settle for that at the moment.

Nice one!

"...I?ll do whatever you want - except for whipped cream. You know I?m allergic.? - Classic line

Nice - I think I pegged it as Duo about halfway through, defiantly a bit of a twist to the way this paring normally goes (though I admit I don't generally read this parring).

Just figured I'd mention you've double posted it as well.

Nice, I can definitely see this happening.

And I'm sorry to say I was one of the one's who read and didn't review. I couldn't think of anything constructive to say - and 'Well done write more!' (generally) isn't that helpful I find.

Anyway Well done write more!

Nice fic, guess the pilots get to be part of the Sword rather than the Shield for once?

I can certainly see most of the pilots slipping some during peacetime, after all, what's a few workout sessions missed when your life isn't constantly on the line?

Can't wait for the next one.