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Shooting Gundam Star · Tue Jan 06, 2004 10:02 pm

Wow.
Very dark and a bit cold but in a very beautiful way. The song really matched the whole fic and the refliction on Heeros past was amazing. Over all a very good fic!

Wingnut · Post by **Wingnut** » Tue Jan 06, 2004 11:24 pm

It fits.
A little too personal, as opposed to the fighting in MS we see him in most often, but boiled down with the ZERO system it is possible that Heero could see it that way.
And also with the classic topic of Relena becomeing his salvation from that dark past of his.
Wonderful, dark, but wonderful.

Rose of Betrayal · Post by **Rose of Betrayal** » Wed Jan 07, 2004 3:51 am

That was excellent. I really enjoyed it, and the song matches what is going on in his head. It was a dark fic, but a truly enjoyable one.

War Dove · Post by **War Dove** » Wed Jan 07, 2004 9:27 am

Wow, this was totally awesome and simply blew me away. You have such an awesome style that I wish I was able to pick up on.

I also think I know the fic that you're rewriting, but to be safe I'm not going to even take a guess at it. Just know I've been following your stuff for a long while.

Tomorrow · Post by **Tomorrow** » Thu Jan 15, 2004 6:18 pm

Hi everyone. My reply to your reviews took much longer than I'd originally anticipated.

First of all, I wanted to thank each of you (both readers and reviewers) for your interest and feedback. In all honesty, I was extremely nervous about posting this, because I was afraid it might offend some people. I had just finished reading an article about something similar to bloodlust, and the first thing I thought of was Heero. I realize that he doesn't like killing anymore, but especially at the commencement of the series, one almost got the feel that he... got pleasure from murder, especially when it resulted from his prowess (his maniacal laughter is what I'm referring to). It wasn't until later, after he met the pilots and Relena, that we really got a sense of remorse from him. I just thought I'd try this idea out.

Thanks for all of your feedback and the compliments.

~Tomorrow

Faye Faye · Post by **Faye Faye** » Fri Jan 16, 2004 5:39 pm

I loved it! My theory is that, no matter how weird it sounds, there is no such word as RAPE when Heero is doing it. Lol He could do whatever he wanted to do to me. mmmmmm plus, he was kinda sexy, ok that sounded masogenistic, but the kinda vampire bitings were just a little on the sexeh side. ::drools::

DeadPoet · Post by **DeadPoet** » Fri Jan 16, 2004 9:18 pm

Very dark... but I like it!!! Nice work ^_^

Sovereign of Silence · Sat Jan 17, 2004 8:39 am

Very Dark poor heero i guess he couldn't help it

"dark Heero"
ah well :razz: good thing real heero is not like that

Fatimai1 · Post by **Fatimai1** » Tue Jan 20, 2004 1:56 pm

that was amazing. i really enjoyed reading that

still freaky though :-?

Calla Lily · Post by **Calla Lily** » Wed Mar 10, 2004 10:19 pm

You know what? Everybody here is saying that this was a dark fic, not that I'm denying it, but I relish the fact that it is.
It's another side of Heero that I've always imagined, that something that caused him to be this way. Your use of language is wonderful and you truly have talent in writing.

Furthermore, Relena's "sacrifice" just brought a whole new level of depth to the story. Faye Faye said ealier, "There's no such thing as RAPE for Heero." or something along those lines, I also think that's true. (but perhaps not quite with the rest of what she said...)

Wow, this was amazing. Wow.

Excuse me while I go submerge myself into that pool of darkness yet again. [cackles sadistically]

"Once more into the breach, dear friends, once MORE!!!"

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