Well, you did a wonderful job.I wrote it as close to the feelings I got from the series. I put in alittle bit of my own ideas...especially on how a dad should be with his child.
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Thank you... 
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Wow Pilot. Talk about heart breaking. In my mind I just kept seeing the scene of Gene being pushed into the escape pod and how much it must've hurt his dad to let go of his son.
And poor Gene. Having to be separated from his father in such a manner. I don't think I ever let it get to me when I watched the series but you brought it home. Gah! Angst! Nicely done!
Now I am looking forward to your next story. Chop chop buddy!!
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P.S. I'm sure glad this fic was rec'd to me. ~_^
And poor Gene. Having to be separated from his father in such a manner. I don't think I ever let it get to me when I watched the series but you brought it home. Gah! Angst! Nicely done!
Now I am looking forward to your next story. Chop chop buddy!!
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P.S. I'm sure glad this fic was rec'd to me. ~_^
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So far this has been my best fic posted on BI. I finally got another fic posted...a GW one. :razz:
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Great story! Definitely write more. You did Outlaw Star justice with this fic. And I appreciate that you know how to spell. WRITE MORE!
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