Outlaw Star: A Father's Love

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Outlaw Star: A Father's Love

Post by pilot03 »

**Authors disclaimer: I do not own or ever will **cries tears** Outlaw Star

--Personal note: This is my first fan fic. Love it, hate it, love to hate it. Please review. I'm posting this fic for the few who posted and encouraged me to write this fic. I mean, come on... we can't have only 1 Outlaw Star fan fic on BI. Right? Oh yah, be nice on the review please. *holds out large sum of money* :-P

A Father's Love
by: Pilot03


Smoke stung at his eyes causing his vision to blur. Everywhere he looked he saw fire and destruction. Warning bells screeched and lights on the flight controls blinked at an alarming rate which signaled the impending death of their vessel. He looked out the shattering co-pilot window and saw the advancing pirate ship that had suddenly attacked them coming about for another pass on its prey. He was scared. He didn't know what to do and his indecisiveness paralyzed his small frame.

"We're going to die here," he stated numbly. "I?m right aren't I dad..."

The young Starwind looked at his senior. Determination and love was embedded on his face.

"Where did those pirates come from!" he spat out with distain.

He refused to allow these pirates to harm his child. Life had taken his wife and he wasn't about to lose all he had left in the world. Today was to be Gene's first trip into space to learn the skills of piloting a spacecraft. He had been looking forward to this day since the day his son could walk. He knew without anyone telling him that he had to protect his most valued treasure so he could mature into a man.

While fighting with the controls to steer the ship away from oncoming death, he turned to his son.

"Where is the pirate, keep an eye on him!!"

When he received no reply he looked into his son's face. He could easily see the shallow breathing and far away look on his face. He had seen that expression a long time ago. The face of a man who knew his time had come. He wasn't going to have that. Not at all. Not for Gene.

Within moments a plan was hatched in his head, and strong hands old from age and hard work went into action. He turned the ship into a arch that would buy the precious minutes needed to bargain death with for the price of his boy's life. With that done, he unfastened himself from his command chair and like-wise detached Gene from his restraints.

Gene was still numb to all that was going on around him and he barely noticed the sensation of being lift from his seat by his father. The change of setting as the corridors of the ship swept past his vision brought him out of his stupor as he realize he was being dragged to the rear of the ship.

"What are we going to do. The ship is doomed and the pirates will capture us," Gene yelled over the noise of the battle. "We have to fight them or we are going to die!!"

Just then a explosion rocked the ship causing Gene to close his eyes shut and bring up his arms to cover his face. Pieces of metal and wire that where once arteries to his inheritance came flying at them. When the shock subsided and Gene felt no pain, he opened his eyes to see his father shielding him with his body. Gene's father quickly scooped him up and they raced to the area mark as the bay for the ship's life pods.

Gene spoke again with fear clearly audible in his voice, "How will we escape!" His father made no response. He was busy looking out a port window.

Electrical systems began to fail all around the ship and the lights began to flicker giving the paling young boy a ghoulish appearance. His father shuttered at the sight. Gene was looking franticly around. His previous episode of indecisiveness had given way to one of panic. He realized quickly to his dismay that the air was getting harder to breath and the temperature was falling quickly. He didn't have to be an experienced space pilot to tell him what his instincts quickly informed him of.

"We haven't that much time left!!" The ship was coming apart faster then either Starwind had expected. The time for action was quickly reducing itself and with it all hope of survival.

With deft finger and control over his ship, Gene's father entered a code on a nearby hatch. With a hiss, the door swung open to reveal a hidden alcove. This ship was long from new and had originally been configured to support four escape pods for the crew. Time and the sudden attack by the pirates had left all but one pod operational. Describing the pod as functional was a stretch of the truth, but that was all that was left to them. One shitty escape pod was to be the means to their salvation. A sense of relief started to come over the senior Starwind. He turn from his boy for the moment to inspect the pod before entering. Just as quickly as fate had seem to give them both a means of escape, it took it right back. The calm that had began to sooth him, had turned into a freezing sweat.

He looked out a nearby hatch window and saw a planet coming into view. The last coordinates he had entered before departing with his son from the bridge had brought them close to this planet. It was his plan to use the pod and enter the atmosphere to get out of the reach of the pirates. He looked at the scan of the damage to the pod. The main life support was shot. He quickly calculated the distance to the planet and the available air in the reserve tanks and his assumptions were correct.

Only one person could make the trip. One person or both would die. It was not a hard decision for him to make.

Gene started, "Dad, you don't expect us both to make it out on that. Why don't we fight it oooo.... HHHEEEEYYYY!!!!" With movements that would put a man half his age to shame, Gene's father took hold of his shoulders and flung him into the pod. Even before Gene had hit the floor, his father was already securing the hatch.

Dazed at first, Gene quickly regain his senses and leapt to his feet. He went to the hatch and began pounding away at the door which such force his hands where bleeding.

"NNNNOOOOO!!"

"Father the hatch is closed," Gene yelled franticly "You have to hurry and get inside before it's to late.....Father!!!!"

Gene's father could hear the boy pounding on the hatch with all he had in him. The desperate pleas and frighten cries of his only child brought tears to his already stinging eyes.

IwillnotbreakIwillnotbreakIwillnotbreakIwillnotbreak

Gene's father could no longer look into the hysterical expression of his son begging for him to reconsider. He cast his gaze downward and closed his eyes for a second. In that brief moment, he relived Gene's life thru his memories. He saw him being born from his beautiful young bride. A life he help create and would nourish and protect. He saw himself raising the boy as best as he could. He never claimed to be perfect, but he had done his best to teach him the important lesson of life. He saw all the time he had failed Gene as well. A deep and all consuming regret filled his soul. He would never have the chance to make up for them. He when up to every moment until he was back in the present. We wanted so desperately to be there for his son. Life had already taken his mother.

He said a quick prayer that his son would be looked after and to live his life well. More importantly, he prayed Gene would not grow up with hate in his heart and that he would keep fond memories of him and his lovely mother in his heart to comfort him for the hard times ahead.

With that done, Gene's father look upon his son one last time and smiled. He hoped the expression would communicate to Gene just how proud he was of him. Then he closed his eyes once more and hit the release latch to the escape pod. Explosions rocked the ship and a wall of fire began to rush to the rear of the ship.

"Live well Gene Starwind," he spoke "I have one last lesson for you,....go out and find your destiny,......and never forget the love of a father for his son...."

In that instance, both Starwinds where pushed into blackness. Gene tumbled thru the vastness of space until he shot thru the sky like a shooting star to begin his new life with pain in his heart and a new fear of space. He opened his eyes to a brand new world that would take him on a quest for revenge against the pirates who attacked his father's ship.

Gene's father never again opened his.

End
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Last edited by pilot03 on Fri Sep 05, 2003 11:37 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Post by pilot03 »

Man, it doesn't look as long when you post it, any who... here it is for all you wanting more Outlaw Star. I got other stories I'm working on, but I wanted to post this one to test the waters so to speak. I wrote this while listening to anime soundtracks and waiting 1 1/2 hrs for a ride home.

*nobody loves me* :cry:
*Well maybe my mom.....umm......naw.*

Let me know what you think so I can finish up my other fics or go bury myself in my room and throw away me computer. ahahhaha :-P
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
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*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

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Post by elyra-chan »

Wow... this is an amazing piece of writing. The way you perceive emotions is great, and your characterization is dead on. Usually I go for the more humorous fics, but sometimes I like to read the more serious fics, but only if they are good. This story most certainly does the series justice. I strongly encourage you to write more! Ja ne! :wink:
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Post by cherryflavored1R »

*accepts large sum of money from 03*

First thing I noticed about this fic: You can spell! Yay!

Okay, so that gets that out of the way.

Next thing: It's about Gene and his departed father... AND HAS GOOD CHARACTERIZATION (wow, that word looks weird in all caps). The emotions and expressions shown by the two characters were very insightful on your part, and it felt like I could see the animation in my mind, thanks to your descriptions.

Yay! That means a good story!

Last thing: I wondered if your statement at the beginning ("this is my first fic") was a lie.

So.... tell us the truth....

Okay, I'm just kidding. But this was an excellent story, and I will look forward to reading lots and lots and lots more from you!

(and lots and lots and lots)

-Cherry
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Post by pilot03 »

Your review was well worth the money...rrr... I mean thank you. I'm glad you really enjoyed the fic. First, it is my very first fan fic that I have ever written. I usually write often, but not in the anime genre. Secondly, I posted the fic in hopes that you would enjoy it seeing as how you always reply to my posts. Your inspiration for me and I hope to keep on posting in the near future. Let me know if you have any special requests and I will be happy to please you. *wink* :salute:
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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Post by elyra-chan »

You should most definitely post more Outlaw Star fics! The serious lack of OS fics aside, your writing is really good, and I think that this forum would benefit from your skills. :D :bounce: As stated in my earlier post: I LOVE this fic.
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Post by pilot03 »

Update:

Sorry for the delay. I will be posting more fics in the very near future. Things have been going slowly due to laziness and personal problems. I just wanted to let anyone that was interest know that more fics from the pilot are on the way!! :salute:
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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Post by trekkiexb5 »

Good for you! Great story, but I just don't know about Outlaw Star!!


But it was well written, though!!

From "your wife"

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Post by Andrea »

I'll be honest, I've never seen Outlaw Star, BUT, the way you described this, the way you wrote it... I felt like I've been watching OS my entire life.

I want a Dad like that!!..... I loved how they interacted, how you described them... it was so deep. So true. Makes me want to cry... :cry: ...

*huggles Po3* Congrats!! Great story!!!! :razz:

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Post by pilot03 »

*hand tissue* Don't cry...I wrote it as close to the feelings I got from the series. I put in alittle bit of my own ideas...especially on how a dad should be with his child. Men need to grow up.
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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