October's Song (poem)

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October's Song (poem)

Post by cherryflavored1R »

This is a poem I originally considered putting in the 1xR forum, and I do intend to turn this into a fic ("5 Hours"). But I couldn't put it there, knowing that it belongs in the OF... it's kind of not based on 1xR at all.

Thanks to my AP Biology class for being so boring I didn't pay attention today.

October?s Song

5 months is how long ago he left
New mission, new dream, new purpose
I?m here, in the same place, fighting the same fight
Wishing I could be with him

5 hours is my goal today
To go 300 minutes without thinking a single thought
Of dark hair, strong eyes, and dandelion skin
But I was never him- I fail my missions

So 5 million times is how often I think of
That soft sundown in May
Forced goodbyes, shed tears, and false security
Don?t lie- I won?t see you again.

And you won?t miss me.


*sigh* I'm terrible at angst.

-Cherry
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Post by Morrighan »

Aww... *sniffles* That brings back memories.... :cry:

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Post by Lara Winner »

Gosh, this is so heartwrenching. Lovely poem. :cry:
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Post by cherryflavored1R »

Thank you Lara and Morri! I'm not even sure if I realized it when I was writing, but I really poured my heart into this one. I appreciate your commets! I'm glad you guys found this kind of sad, that means I can at least halfway accomplish an angst poem...

-Cherry
I come from tha M effin' Negaverse, yo. I wantcho energy.

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