what a twist:eek: ... well at least she had Candace Mae!
The woman has seen the future
Amour Chapter 8 (non-lemon version)
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samta22
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you don't a lemon scene if you have this....
what a twist:eek: ... well at least she had Candace Mae!
The woman has seen the future
what a twist:eek: ... well at least she had Candace Mae!
The woman has seen the future
"Politicians are the same all over. They promise to build a bridge even where there is no river" Nikita Khrushchev (1894 - 1971)
"Idealism is what precedes experience; cynicism is what follows"David T. Wolf (1943 - )
"The rule is perfect: in all matters of opinion our adversaries are insane" Mark Twain (1835 - 1910)
"Idealism is what precedes experience; cynicism is what follows"David T. Wolf (1943 - )
"The rule is perfect: in all matters of opinion our adversaries are insane" Mark Twain (1835 - 1910)
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AnShino
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I had a feeling that would happen somewhere during that fic. XD
Oh Alex, poor you. And Relena! ;__; How utterly terrible. You had me all shaking with empathy for Relena.
Well, as always, I love this fic and I hope to see more updates in the future~! =] Happy New Year!
An
PS: I hope your moral problems have resolved themselves or will resolve themselves soon! *hug*
Oh Alex, poor you. And Relena! ;__; How utterly terrible. You had me all shaking with empathy for Relena.
Well, as always, I love this fic and I hope to see more updates in the future~! =] Happy New Year!
AnPS: I hope your moral problems have resolved themselves or will resolve themselves soon! *hug*
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perfectpeach
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Wow! I really hope Relena doesn't marry him (it'd be too much like Superman (the new movie if you saw it)), but decides that she can live as a single mother and have a pretend father. I don't know but I know you do. So far, this is my favorite piece of prose ever written and PLEASE PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING! 
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rain2cry
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Hm, can't say I didn't see this one coming. I thought Relena would get pregnant, but the whole "promise to Heero when he goes away again" added to the situation and made it more suspenseful. This chapter seemed shorter than the others, and as much as I liked it (even though you got cold feet 
.) I would have liked to see what the dates with this Alexander guy had been like. Even with Gregory, you really didn't get into details, just implied what happened. I guess to show how deeply Relena is wrapped up in Heero? Just suggesting ^^;.
And my thought on the Relean getting pregnant....what if she loses the baby by miscarriage or some bad accident? Everyone would be happy, wouldn't they? Or would they....?
Anyway, good job Zap.
.) I would have liked to see what the dates with this Alexander guy had been like. Even with Gregory, you really didn't get into details, just implied what happened. I guess to show how deeply Relena is wrapped up in Heero? Just suggesting ^^;.And my thought on the Relean getting pregnant....what if she loses the baby by miscarriage or some bad accident? Everyone would be happy, wouldn't they? Or would they....?
Anyway, good job Zap
.Keep your fears to yourself...but share your courage.
~You can either see through people, or see people through.
~Have patience with all things; but chiefly have patience with yourself.
~Only the craziest or wisest of people ever or never change. Are you either?
~You can either see through people, or see people through.
~Have patience with all things; but chiefly have patience with yourself.
~Only the craziest or wisest of people ever or never change. Are you either?
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freelight01
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i got to admit, to me that wasn't unexpected, i was somewhat waiting for it.
err... maybe its jus me who found this fic somewhat predictable.
but i do love your writing style, it flows nice and easy from one scene to the next, and very emotional, keep it up and get the next chapter out soon ^_^
err... maybe its jus me who found this fic somewhat predictable.
but i do love your writing style, it flows nice and easy from one scene to the next, and very emotional, keep it up and get the next chapter out soon ^_^
"Nothing good can come from hanging around with normal people!" - Harry McDougall
"It is a strange desire of ours, to seek Power but lose Liberty." - Unknown
I never saw a wild thing, sorry for it-self,
A Bird will fall down dead from the cold,
With its wings broken, and its body scared,
And not once in its life did it feel sorry for it-self - Mark Twain
"It is a strange desire of ours, to seek Power but lose Liberty." - Unknown
I never saw a wild thing, sorry for it-self,
A Bird will fall down dead from the cold,
With its wings broken, and its body scared,
And not once in its life did it feel sorry for it-self - Mark Twain
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Kaili Charmer
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