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Cliffie! *sobs*

I want more.

Wonderful fic, as always.

*hugs* Thank you sweetie!

Much love,
Rose

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It's so good to have a new story from you, Rose. I had been missing you. Glad that you are back.

I forget I get considered missing. I'm always writing something, well, almost always. It's my goal to write 1000 words per day 6 days per week. I just...have difficulty editing things so that they're "complete" enough to be posted. Editing isn't my friend...

I don't need to say that I'm already loving this one, but I will say it anyway. I'm loving it. It reminds me a bit of Dangerous Games (one of my favorites) and Murder by Moonlight. I can't wait to se Heero lose his control and get "really involved" with Relena.

You're the 2nd person to mention a similarity to DG, which is far too old in my history for me to think of it kindly, but I'm guessing it's the mafia thing?
Murder by Moonlight is something I need to get un-stuck on. There's definitely similarity there, although Moonlight, I expect to be longer than Sahara Downpour. Although, who knows? Maybe not.

As for Heero...he can't resist Relena very long, now, can he?

I'm sure it will be quite amusing. As for Relena's father selling her out, I'm betting he didn't. And of course, Dorothy can never be trusted, alternate universe or not. Post more soon, please, please, please

*hugs* I'm waiting on some feedback from a writing mentor/coach who I hired to critique the full draft. It should be in the mail tomorrow or Saturday, and then depending on what she has to say (assuming I don't go drown myself), will determine how much work needs to be done on the rest. But, it is complete, believe it or not.

And no, you can never trust Dorothy.

Happy New Year!!!

Much love,
Rose

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This is one chapter where Heero was making more noise--er, speeches--than Duo or Relena or anyone else! His rantings are priceless; when he gets riled, it is so so funny!

Heero: -___-;;; I'm glad you're amused.

Duo: Yeah, me too. The rest of us are running for our lives!

So Wufei's an oldie in this one? BWA ha! But great descriptions--the ever-awesome Noin was just awesome, the ever-scowling Wufei was just scowling.

Yah, Wufei gets to be a little older this time out. And I had a lot of fun with Noin, too. ^___^

I'm a wee bit confused--or probably just dense--as to what the HAY is going on--Huh? Dorothy sold Relena out? Huh? Heero can't believe he fell for what tired old line? So I am going to agonizingly wait for the next chapter for further explantion, and in the meantime, re-read the one

Ooooh. Yes, well, it wouldn't be ANY fun if you already knew what was going on, now would it? We'll find out the truth about Dorothy eventually and Heero fell for Relena's acquiescence to his 'instructions' as it were. He told her not to open the door, etc. etc. and she agreed. And he bought it.

Relena: *snickers* Sucker.

Heero: *glares*

It rocked! Yay Rose!

Thank you, ma'am! And I owe you a PM. I'm getting there. And in the meantime, I hope you had a fantastic holiday and New Years.

Love,
Rose

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this simply rocks!
oh my you're the best
I think it was the most appreciated xmas gift, after the ironcurl (sorry but I've been wanting it for ages)... amazing story anyway, really captivating, can't wait for next chap
p.s. I can't believe Dorothy would sell Relena out, that was low! I know that she's not your average trustworthy person...but I though that she was a good person inside..deep inside..very deeply.. OK! Quatre married her so there has to something!!!