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YAY! Update just in time for Christamas too.

Well what can I say besides, poor Heero! Having to deal with incompetence here and there, and on top of that his feelings making a mess of everything.
Anyway, can't wait for the next update. I loved Noin's and Wufei's parts, good job.
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Post by takisha16 »

OMFG!!!!
I knew Dorothy was up to no good!
Poor Relena!
Heero sure has to deal with incompetent people!
I hope Relena and Heero get out safe!
I like how their relationship is progressing!
Nice update!

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Ah man, This is getting o real good, I'm on the edge of my seat though. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

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Post by melrose_stormhaven »

Cliffie! *sobs*

I want more. :D

Wonderful fic, as always.
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It's so good to have a new story from you, Rose. I had been missing you. Glad that you are back. I don't need to say that I'm already loving this one, but I will say it anyway. I'm loving it. It reminds me a bit of Dangerous Games (one of my favorites) and Murder by Moonlight. I can't wait to se Heero lose his control and get "really involved" with Relena. I'm sure it will be quite amusing. As for Relena's father selling her out, I'm betting he didn't. And of course, Dorothy can never be trusted, alternate universe or not. Post more soon, please, please, please :bounce:

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This is one chapter where Heero was making more noise--er, speeches--than Duo or Relena or anyone else! His rantings are priceless; when he gets riled, it is so so funny!

So Wufei's an oldie in this one? BWA ha! :lol: But great descriptions--the ever-awesome Noin was just awesome, the ever-scowling Wufei was just scowling.

I'm a wee bit confused--or probably just dense--as to what the HAY is going on--Huh? Dorothy sold Relena out? Huh? Heero can't believe he fell for what tired old line? So I am going to agonizingly wait for the next chapter for further explantion, and in the meantime, re-read the one :D

It rocked! Yay Rose! :worship:
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HiFreak wrote:YAY! Update just in time for Christamas too.

Well what can I say besides, poor Heero! Having to deal with incompetence here and there, and on top of that his feelings making a mess of everything.
Anyway, can't wait for the next update. I loved Noin's and Wufei's parts, good job.
Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing in some characters in this story that I don't write a lot - some of them appeared and I don't think I'd ever written them at all.

And yes, poooooor Heero. The incompetence abounds. ;)

I hope you had a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! :D

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takisha16 wrote:OMFG!!!!
I knew Dorothy was up to no good!
Poor Relena!
Heero sure has to deal with incompetent people!
I hope Relena and Heero get out safe!
I like how their relationship is progressing!
Nice update!
I know, you just can't trust Dorothy.

Dorothy: Why does everyone make me out to be a bad girl?
Takisha16: Um, maybe because you ARE!
Rose: No one would believe it if you were NICE to someone, Dotty. You might want to think about that.

*glomps you*

Much love,
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matisleonhart wrote:Ah man, This is getting o real good, I'm on the edge of my seat though. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

P. S. No cash or check needed, though a review of one of my stories from are great awsome commander would be so awsome. in fact it made my hanukkah list this year. :D
^___^ I'm reading All I Want for Christmas. And then I got interrupted and am about to leave so I thought I'd squeeze in a few replies. But, then I shall come back and finish reading. ^___^

NC-17, 1xR lemon, cannot wait! (I saved it for dessert)

*glomps* I hope you had a great holiday!

Much love,
Rose

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