With the Flip of a Coin [ chapter two, PG-13, 1xR ]

[War Dove]

I've always enjoyed this fic and have read this fic and reread this fic several times and am so hoping it gets continued.
Heero so needs put in his proper place

[Nausica?]

Wow, minna, I'm so happy you like it! <-- see, look at happy Naus.

I didn't expect so many replies, but I thank you all for dropping some lines. I do apologize for the rather cruel cliffhanger I left you guys with. * Naus shudders away from Rose's pointy pitchfork * Ah, Rose, you know the rusty ones are the worst! They don't go through cleanly...

I've always enjoyed this fic and have read this fic and reread this fic several times and am so hoping it gets continued.

Ah, War Dove, I remember you! Nice hearing from you again - I love your work. And yes, WAFOAC will get continued. There's just a tiny problem I'm having...

I have to admit to needing a bit of help getting the next chapter out due to two factors:

1. The disk WAFOAC chapter 3 was saved on got corrupted. :evil: Of all the frikkin... * mutters *

And,

2. As I was intending the next chapter to be a lime, the problem (aside from losing all of chapter three - argh!) is is that I've never written one before. With my luck, I'd probably do a real crap job or gross you guys out and the chapter will turn out like some bad porno movie put to words.

I'm at a loss for what to do. What do you guys think?

Should I try and attempt the lime, or should I just kind of hint that its happened and maybe let someone write a lime separately (if they were interested, of course. No pressure!)?

So lost... Either way, until I get some feedback on how chapter three should go, I'll try to rewrite what I can from memory and leave room for either possibility.

Thanks again for the lovely lines, everyone. Until next time...


- Naus

[blackrose]

JUST LIME???? Awwww, and I was keeping my fingers crossed with Lilac that there's be some banging in the car.

Yeah yeah, so my inner hentai isn't so inner anymore.

It's up to you. Your comfort level on the story is the most important factor. As it is your fic. I'd say that the tension you created leads readers to semi expect *ahem* payoff.... And if you're not confident in writing it, I'm sure there are plenty of us hentais, I mean members who could maybe give some pointers or advise, or at the very least beta it.

Email if I can be of assistance.

Love,
Rose

[War Dove]

mmm, well, like Rose said you're comfort level is important, but then again if something makes you uncomfortable as far as making you excited and gets your blood boiling in a good way then you might want to act on it. Challange can be a good thing.

Oh man, I rememeber writing my first lemon. I blushed and giggled and fell into shock through the entire thing as have just about every other lemon author I've ever known has done with the first one they ever wrote, but if you stick with it the more you right it doesn't become such a big deal anymore.

I also feel for you about having stuff getting lost and having to rewrite it, that's happened to me so many times, it can bite big time.

And like Rose, I'll extend a helping hand if you need one, my imagination is overactive espeically since Rose cursed plot bunnies on me awhile back, which I've never thaked her for, yet. *deathglare* j/k of course.

[Aieki Chan]

I say that the coin flipped into Heads. Yeah, maybe...but I still want to read more! But still, Relena at a bar? Now that doesn't seem at realistic, nor fantalizing. With the way Heero acts, he doesn't act normal either. I guess he had too much of a drink...oh well.

[shadowcat]

who wants lime??

* jumps up and down and raises hands *

I do I do!!!

Keep writting!!!

**the shadow

[Beck]

I say Heero takes Rel into a dark corner in the club and just go at it like rabbid horny bunnies I really like the setup you have going on here and at least the booze has loosened Heero up a bit, talk about courage Hmmm... a lime, I don't see why not, at least since you are a beginner, I would start from the bottom and work your way up eventually to a lemon but it all depends on the person. My first sex fic was an all out lemon (Big Man w/ Big Gun) and I was surprised on how well it turned out. It all depends on the person on how comfortable they are on writing it so if you need any help as well, feel free to drop me a line. I never wrote a lime before, just all lemons for me, maybe one of these days I'll try a lime out, but I'm not holding my breath

I can't wait to see more of this fic though!

[War Dove]

Oh wow Beck, I love that idea. They going off to a secluded, or shadowy part of the club and going at it would be an awesome scene. Oh man, I can so picture it.

[Nausica?]

Ah, Big Man with a Big Gun... I am such a fan of that fic, Beck! I mourned the loss of it at ff.net and was ecstatic on finding it here. I do believe it was the first lemon I had ever read. * Naus puffs out chest * My, I do choose great fics to read, if I do say so myself

And after taking a bit of time off reading your replies, I have finally decided to try my hand at writing a lime... * stops typing and bites lip * or a lemon? :-? I honestly don't know when a lime fic crosses the line and becomes a lemon. Anyone care to explain? Either way, everyone who's offered to guide me: Thanks so much for the help you've offered, and I'll contact you guys if and when I need assistance. * blows kisses *

I say Heero takes Rel into a dark corner in the club and just go at it like rabbid horny bunnies

Oh wow Beck, I love that idea. They going off to a secluded, or shadowy part of the club and going at it would be an awesome scene. Oh man, I can so picture it.

Ehehe... you're not the only one who can picture this happening, War Dove. I have to admit that the idea's taken root in my mind now... would it bother you if I used it, Beck? I'm not sure if I will use it yet, but in either case, may I? If I do, props will be directed to you (of course).

Well, that's all for now, sweets. I'll try to get the next chapter up soon - I won't say when, cause knowing and being me: I won't follow it up.

Until next time...


- Naus

[Beck]

Ah, Big Man with a Big Gun... I am such a fan of that fic, Beck! I mourned the loss of it at ff.net and was ecstatic on finding it here. I do believe it was the first lemon I had ever read. * Naus puffs out chest * My, I do choose great fics to read, if I do say so myself

Silly girl I saw you comment on my fic and I'm still working on catching up with a few things.

And after taking a bit of time off reading your replies, I have finally decided to try my hand at writing a lime... * stops typing and bites lip * or a lemon? :-? I honestly don't know when a lime fic crosses the line and becomes a lemon. Anyone care to explain? Either way, everyone who's offered to guide me: Thanks so much for the help you've offered, and I'll contact you guys if and when I need assistance. * blows kisses *[/color]

Sounds great! Hmm.... lime bording on lemon. Lime is more like, I wanna say like foreplay, its kinda the start of something yet to happen but its not fully explained in detail (ex: heavy petting, touching in certain areas, hungry kisses, etc). Lemon is when you start going beyond the foreplay and start describing what they are really doing If you are still a bit confused, feel free to ask some more questions.

Ehehe... you're not the only one who can picture this happening, War Dove. I have to admit that the idea's taken root in my mind now... would it bother you if I used it, Beck? I'm not sure if I will use it yet, but in either case, may I? If I do, props will be directed to you (of course).

Hehehehehe everytime I think about the fic now, I too can just see that happening. Sure go ahead and play with the idea. I had an idea similiar to that 2 yrs ago: club scene, Rel going under a disguise to have some fun, Heero visiting the colony and runs into Duo who helps or gives hints to Heero about a certain someone, Heero going to the club and seeing her, then one thing would lead to another and their going at it somewhere dark in the club. It was a good idea when I thought of it and had the beginning written but it just never went anywhere and I highly doubt it that it will ever see the light again or be finished. So YEAH! Go for it!!

Well, that's all for now, sweets. I'll try to get the next chapter up soon - I won't say when, cause knowing and being me: I won't follow it up.

Until next time...


- Naus

Just don't keep us waiting TOO long