Poor Heero!
Funny story
I think the interaction between W.C. and Heero is worthing of more space, you know?
Perhaps in the next chapter ? ::hints::
What I can say.. I'm a W.C. fan
Finally I found the right time to read the new 2 chapters. I like the both versions and I really can't tell you if you should keep the lemon or not. Perhaps you could simply have 2 different versions :wink: I don't see such Heero OOC for the lemon part: I think he is even more intimate in other ...
AH AHHhhh!!! finally!!
But something tells me that you are more evil than me. I don't know why but I have this feeling....
So, your next chapter?
(yes, I know, you have just posted one, but you know, I am kinda addicted )
CIAO!
Eheheheheh... finally Heero is figuring out his feeling for Rel. Gah, that boy is so slow!! :wink: Very very good chapter: I've really enjoyed it, even if I was feeling a bit sick at the end.... yeah, I could never image myself on a boat in the open sea and under a hurricane! :pale: