Blissful Ignorance

Bump-bada-bump!

The first segment of Chapter 5 is up on my LJ: http://patriot-jackie.livejournal.com/

Five more of these such parts will combine to create the full Chapter 5 at which point I'll post the full thing here.

Yus.

Of course, I have no room to complain with projects such as The Man and TE... >.>

Okay. I'll bite.

In response to Jackie's: I would say it is definitely more story-based in that you have description of what someone is doing leading up to an event, which makes for an interesting introduction to a story. This is a hard challenge, I think, which is what makes it valuable ...

*Snickers* Well, I certainly want to write something for this Jackie. Kudos on starting it. What creative writing book did you buy, btw, and does it come with samples?

As for critique on your piece, I thought it was good. It may do well with more similies and metaphors, but anything too obscure ...

:-? My parents rented the movie from netflicks. I didn't watch it. According to my brother, it's a good thing I didn't. XD

O____O;;;; Hey guys... Hey....

*runs away*

*The number 42 sweeps over Jackie's head and she doesn't even look to see what flew over until ten seconds have elapsed by.*

o.o Huh??

You're amazing.

I don't see why you should need my permission. XD I think it's a great idea, but only if you're up to it.

:-? But I guess that means I have to be a little more descriptive, huh?? ^^;

Noin!!

:-? Questions about The Man... Everyone says on the minific, "Jackie! I need to talk to you!"

SPEAK!!! :razz: