Blissful Ignorance

Never underestimate Dorothy's desire to stir the pot. I could see her performing a monologue. "Oh! What a grand scene it shall be!" I, for one, can't agree more.

Ok. Cole is definetly a psychopathic nimrod. He may as well start calling Relena 'my precious.'

The plot is thickening. I can almost ...

Melrose! That was awesome!

Why do I get the suspicious feeling that it was supposed to be Relena binded to the Dragon general in the first place and Alina was a substitute for some reason or other. Oh well, pure speculation, of course! :)

Anyway, I am really liking this story so far! So...where's ...

I've read all the comments so far... and I agree with most of them. However, I don't think you're going to accomplish much with a BBS. Ok, your time is limited and this is what you've got, but seriously, you might want to consider a MySQL backend with at least a php front end. That way you'll have ...

You're a genius, GM1. XD


I so wish someone would tell my boss that so I could get a nice raise to go with the ever increasing cost of the benefit program! ARGH!! :)

Eeek! I'm betraying my age. I've passed over the hump of college life...a few years ago in fact. Now, I'm an old working lady with ...

Sure! The same rules apply. If it's a song fic, typically there will be at least one line of the song, if not the chorus, that is the theme of the fic. If it's a one shot, what exactly is the one shot about. You should be able to state that in one or two sentences. Again, there's your theme. From ...

I'm not too sure why, but the first thing I felt after reading this chapter was disappointment. Don't get me wrong. I liked this chapter and I've liked every one that came before it. In fact, I was extremely excited when I saw you'd posted chapter 7.

Yet...after reading it a second time to try and ...

Hmm..ok, I have to be honest. I'm not going to review a story unless it really moves me and I think that the writing is fantastic. I don't review stories that I...well...really don't like or that I think aren't written very well. Giving opinions takes time as Rose pointed out.

The biggest qualm ...

Ok guys, I'm going to warn you right now...I am the plan ahead geak! I am a programmer. Everything I do has to come with an outline or more preferably a diagram (I like visuals better)! :eek:

Ok, on with the show...

Numbero Uno -> A theme!! (Otherwise entitled -> What the heck is this story about ...

*sniff* Oh my heart just sqeezes itself to death everytime I read a chapter of this!

It is so true how time and circumstance are so important. Two people can meet who could be very right for each other. Yet if it's the wrong time or the situation is bad, things almost always end sourly.

Heero is ...

*squeal*

I'm so happy you updated this fic! I remember reading chapter 5 a few months ago and being quite intrigued! I then went back and started at the beginning! I can't wait to find out what will happen between our favorite couple!!!