I'm not very practised at writing lemons so I was kinda hoping someone could quickly check over my NC-17 oneshot called 'The Primula Acaulis'?
It functions fine as a standalone but is actually intended to be part of the <a href="http://blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/view ... 594">'Five pieces of Heaven'</a> series so it would be a nice bonus if you'd read that, then you could tell me whether it goes with or doesn't etc.
I would warn you that it's WAFFy so be prepared for that kind of thing and the lemon is supposed to be soft and sensual. I'm very
about it so it would really mean a lot to me if someone could just read over before I post.Message me please if you're interested because I would like to get it posted as soon as possible.