Dreaming with open eyes

[angel222]

Dreaming with open eyes





I?ve been talking to invisible characters
For so long
That in trying to fight off loneliness
I forgot who I am

The world I called into life turned on me
The embrace I dreamed
Holds me in the past I tried to forget
Somehow I changed

I smile again without dreaming with open eyes
Running from the world
That I once ran to so I can separate myself
From whom I dreamed to be

All these years of loneliness melted away
But my personalities mixed
I don?t remember who the real me is anymore
I?m still dreaming

Reviews would be appreciated

[Chibi-sitter]

OMG!
Do you have any idea how much that poem's like telling my life for the past 5 years (since my parents divorced) thanks for the poem, kinda made me open my eyes a bit
(um...did I make sense just then? )

[angel222]

Yes sweety you still make sense *pats chibi on the head*

[Chibi-sitter]

*Chibi purs*

Wish I could write poetry like you but my vocab sux

[angel222]

I don't know how I find the ideas to write, I just put on some music and write on the rythm

[Chibi-sitter]

I listen to music (My beloved iPOD) when making icons, yeah I guess what I lack in the creative writing department I make up for in the graphics
What type of music do you listen to when writing? Instrumental, bands etc?

[angel222]

J-pop, right now I'm crazy about Fiction Junction Yuuka. you shud listen to the song kouya Ruten when you got the time (btw, the poem above has been inspired on the song Joy to my life -> Dorothy's image song)