Monochrome Boundaries [1/1]

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Monochrome Boundaries [1/1]

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<B>Monochrome Boundaries</B>
By Andrea
Rated PG
Romance
<i>Standard Disclaimers Apply</i>

<b>Author?s Notes:</b> This one?s for Melodrama.

<b>Warnings:</b> Not proofread.


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The sun had set by the time he made his way to the window; the orange orb nothing more than a mere memory of shimmering ocean lines and fading dreams. The night was ablaze in light, the moon with her borrowed light, hung off the sky like a huge silver charm, casting her hypnotic spell over the dark lands at her mercy. It was as if in a moment of insanity, He had messed up and scattered the night with millions of brilliant stars, chaos and splendor harmonized, titillating, iridescent, an exquisite revolution.

And oh, he was mesmerized; it seemed as if it was his very first time gazing at the fascinating beauty of that ebony canvas, daring and mysterious, eternal in its depth, limited in its darkness. He counted and recounted, pointing whichever way his heart chose, his mind following a second later, trying to calculate its infinity, its ravaging secret, so ancient they defied reason.

It was that same dark sky, so mischievous, their accomplice during those fateful meetings where they would meet under these very same stars to share, to understand, to simply gaze at each other. It was under this very same night, where he held her hand for the first time, where she allowed him to touch her hair and watch it shimmer under the blazing moonbeams. Under this sky, covered in its inky secret, she told him she loved him, where she allowed him to love her completely and without shame.

Night lovers, runaways of light, as they hid during the day under false pretenses of princess and protector, days where he would stand in his everlasting shadow and she would remain in her eternal light. During the days, with the sun blazing high in the sky, with curious stares of devotion and admiration cast at her, hidden looks of fear and doubt sent his way?yes, during these days, he stands hidden in shadows, his vow to her heightened by his unwavering will, fueled with the promise that by night he would be allowed into her light without fear of regret, that with the dying of the powerful sun, she would come to him and be his.

At night, all pretenses were tucked away, left behind with the peers who worshipped her?she would become again an ordinary woman, a woman allowed to laugh and sing in time with the ocean?s waves, an ordinary woman allowed to love a not-so-ordinary man, a woman left free to just be herself in the comfort of his arms.

Every night, a new memory would surface, a new memory they would treasure during the days. A memory of sand between their naked toes, a memory of drenched skirt hems and lilting laughter, a memory of dark blue eyes alight with happiness, a memory of a hardened face, broken up and set free.

A gorgeous memory? So unique in its simplicity? When he allows her to take his hand in hers for no purpose at all? Just for the single reason that she could.

He looks up at her?his head resting on her soft legs, her wheat-colored tresses surrounding him in a curtain of light?her smile is assuring and comforting at the same time. And he knows, he knows it without really knowing how, without wanting to understand why, that someday he will be allowed into her days, into her life, the same way he has let her into his night and into his heart.


The End.
Last edited by Andrea on Thu Aug 31, 2006 8:41 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Awww.... *is loving the fluff* I love the metaphor that is the underlying theme of this little ficlet. Soooo beautiful!

*glomps*

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Wai!! Thankies, sis! I love metaphors and symbolism... I'm glad you enjoy them as well.

*glomps back!* :love:

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Post by The Angry Angel »

Words escape me. Just lovely. _SO_ beautiful! *is overwhelmed* *cries*

:heart: When the comes that I need to write a love letter, I'm coming to you. Definitely :-P
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Post by takisha16 »

:cry:
I can just picture the scenes and them together!
This reminded me of a great Heero and Relena pic. One with them
under a tree and Heero resting his head on her lap. :hug:
It's so cute and adorable, I loved the mistery behind it!
The way you go about making your descriptions is awesome, plus you
don't give us too many information, just a taste! :allright:
Way to go!

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Post by samta22 »

Great! :cheer: :cheer: :cheer:

That and overwhelming! :allright:

This is a really good piece! :D
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Post by Andrea »

Me? Write love letters? Don't think so!! I suck at those!

I didn't think it was a sad fic, Takisha!! Aww!! Though I'm still very happy you enjoyed it.

Samta! Thankies for all those smilies!!

*huggles her reviewers!!*

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Post by Lady Saffir »

Very nice, Andrea. Very hopeful and, well...I guess I'd say peaceful.

Now, where's the smut? *grin*

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Post by Andrea »

*DIES*

You, too? Do I have a sticker with the words SMUT BUNNY stuck on my forehead?

:dunno:

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Post by Lady Saffir »

It's actually on the back of your shirt. I have no idea who stuck it there though....

'Ask me about my next smut story' <----that's what it says.

Would I make something like this up? :-P

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