Yours Forever (Gundam Seed, Mu/Murrue)

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Yours Forever (Gundam Seed, Mu/Murrue)

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Warning: If you haven't seen Gundam Seed, I wouldn't read this: it's an ending spoiler (unless you don't care!).


A/N: I just watched Gundam Seed for the first time and fell in love with the storyline. Murrue Ramius quickly became my favourite character, and I focused on the romance between her and Mu La Flaga throughout the show. When Mu died, it ruined all the ideas I had for romance fan fics on him and Murrue. :cry: I realize that I can write around this and do the whole ?Mu somehow made it out alive? scenario, but that seems a bit daunting? For now I?ve written this poem, from Murrue?s point of view after Mu?s death. I hope to turn it into a more detailed story later on. For now, please give me some feedback on this so I can decide whether or not to center a story on the song. Thank you.


Disclaimer: Nobody on this site owns Gundam Seed, especially me.



Yours Forever


The darkness of space
Shrouds my face
From the piercing wind
But I don?t mind
The cold that stings
At least, then, I can
Feel something


My heart?s been useless
Since you left
Shattered into pieces
Of broken promises


Cut by jagged shards
I can?t conceal the scars
Let me fall into the stars
To where you are


I?ll be yours forever
We won?t be kept apart
Even death can?t sever
The love joining our hearts


And I?ll always remember
The sacrifice you made
But I won?t forgive you, ever
For leaving me this way


Alone and uncertain
Infinitely hurting
Let down by love again
Consoled by the darkness
It?s my only solace
From this crippling pain


Is it ridiculous
I still dream of your kiss?
Your two lips meeting mine
So much was left undone
But everyone
Says I?ll heal well enough in time
But they?re wrong?


I can?t forget you, ever
If you told me to, I won?t
?Cause I?ll be yours forever
Things change, but feelings don?t


I?m tied to you forever
Fastened to your side
Entwining like the hazel
Around the ivy vine


And I?ll be yours forever
Soon we won?t be apart
Death will join together
The bonds that tie our hearts


I?ll follow you into forever
To sweet, eternal dark
I?ll sleep in your arms forever
Wrapped inside the stars?

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Post by Wingnut »

Should I really spoil Destiny and tell you something that I probably shoudn't that could also help you write Mu/Murrue fics or not?
Rose, HELP. I want to, but I don't want to spoil things needlessly.

PS. Mu and Murrue are my 2nd all time favorite couple in any Gundam universe. First is Domon and Rain from G Gundam and Heero and Relena come in 3rd.
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Post by Aeris_Eithne »

:eek: I'm a bit shocked. I'm still getting into Gundam series outside Wing, so perhaps you can tell me what Gundam Seed Destiny is... Is it a sequel, alternate universe, or what? Is it possible Mu is actually alive?! *_* Ohhhhh my heart!

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Gundam Seed Destiny is a sequal series that takes begins on October 2 CE 73. SEED ended on September 26 CE 71.
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Romance fanfic rule #1: Canon couples always take priority over all others.

The three most hated words in all of television... To Be Continued.

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Post by Aeris_Eithne »

:eek: Ooooooohhhh..... I think I'll just go hit up E-bay now, then...

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Post by Nuzack »

You love Mu more than me, don't you? :-?

And we'll go buy the rest of SEED next week when I get paid.

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Post by blackrose »

I love Mu/Murrue, but I have to admit I found a fondness for Andy/Murrue at the beginning of Destiny.

And Wingnut, I'm so disappointed in you. Heero/Relena is only 3rd?!?!

I haven't seen all of Destiny, I skimmed it. As for other Gundam series, I've only watched 08th MS all the way through and Gundam Seed. For me, Heero/Relena is and probably will always by my first love. Though I've found myself irrationally fond of Athrun/Lacus in Seed. :love:

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