Blissful Ignorance

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Well, that's my first fic. I would deeply appreciate some comments and suggestions from multiple people. I plan on being an active member of this forum, and I'm pretty sure I'll keep writing in the future. Thanks for reading!

-0mikr0n

PS: If you've got questions, post 'em! I'd be happy to answer them.

I like the way you made the ending Relena's diary. Very insightful.
I think it's kind of funny, a little, the way it ends so calmly. I mean after all they went trough. But I really like the way Relena sees her relationship with Heero.
As for Nadya being pregnant, well it certainly is a surprise.
Oh. And Heero getting himself fixed, well that was interesting. But I guess it makes sense, when you're a pseudo-leader of the world you can't really go around having kids huh? And Heero did do it to protect her in a way so it is very Heero like.
Well. I enjoyed your story and certainly look forward to more.

Hey, my pleasure. This certainly was quite fun to read, I'll say that outright.

I have to thank you though, HiFreak. Without you responding to this, I admit that I might have ditched it. Thanks for your undying support; it saved the story!



As for the ending... well, keep in mind that it happens two months after the raid, so Relena's had a quite a bit of time to think... and to plan. I decided to show a view from her diary because the story truly focused on her, although I didn't plan it that way from the beginning... I unconsciously stuck her right there in the middle of the story all the time, which wasn't my intention, but it ended up working out perfectly.

I need a female perspective though, HiFreak... how was the romantic side of it?

And was I cliche in any sense? Anywhere? I would appreciate any insight!

HiFreak, you saved my existence. Thank you...

And PLEASE don't tell Relena that I read her diary... she'll fire me and force me to live on the streets before sending a strike team to pick me up... and then she'll have them drag me into her office... and she'll say...

"Have you learned your lesson?"

Just before rehiring me.

Kevin, I think she already-- ow! Hey, quit pushing!

Relena: "You sick little... I knew you were in there for a different reason than to just look off the balcony!"

Now, now, Relena, take it easy. It's just that he's curious...

Relena: "You're fired, Kevin."

NOOOOOO!!!

*runs to house and gathers a week's worth of food*

Aww, now Relena... that wasn't very nice.

Relena: "He'll be back."

I don't know, I think he might be heading to Mexico this ti- eh, what are you doing, Relena?

Relena: *puts on a Sombrero* "We're going after him."

WHA?!

Relena: "We can't just leave him there."

:x

I always love Kevin Viscotti's opinion.

no, but really, the romantic side was very good actually. I was kind of surprised when I realised you were a guy ^_^; no offence. Of course it was a little angsty but that's just the way the fic was. Besides a little angst is always needed.

Kevin: "Well, after being hunted all over Zurich, Relena's finally caught me (at the airport, I was heading to Mexico) and dragged me ALL THE WAY back to Switzerland by the ear... she was saying something about cowardice, but I really couldn't hear her...

"And now I can't hear anything. Oops. Anyway, keep reference to the "The End...?" thing... maybe my buddy 0mikr0n here might go a little bit more into the details later!

Cheers!
- Kevin James Viscotti
Yuy Institute Representative