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Shots Fired - Part I - Chapter 3

Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 11:43 am
by 0mikr0n
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 12:39 pm
by HiFreak
Just have to say that I really love your little trivia bits. When I read your fics there are little things that stick out, but then I forget about them like the whole Quatra mumbling thing. Your trivia is great for helping me to remember, after all it is the little things that make a story good.

As to this chapter, I must say that I really enjoyed the HeeroXRelena scene. I know your focus is not on them, but I'm a 1XR romantic and can't help focusing on their little moments. :oops:

But Viscotti's story is really good too! It's like reading a whole new series, you know, like if its not really a Gundam Wing fic. But the characters are still there.

Anyway great job, and since you have been posting dayly, I wont have to wait long for the next chapter, right? :wink:
Can't wait.

Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 12:59 pm
by 0mikr0n
I might have to hold off for a little bit, I got school this next week, and then I'm done-- wait, no. Frickin' summer school... gah... I just hope I get my restriction lifted. If I do, I can write to my heart's contentment.

Yes, I included the 1XR moments to emphasize how connected they are, and that they understand each other, despite their inversely disproportional emotions and feelings. This is important later on.

Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:50 pm
by 0mikr0n
Bumpity Bump with Donald Trump!