Shots Fired - Part I - Chapter 3
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Shots Fired - Part I - Chapter 3
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Just have to say that I really love your little trivia bits. When I read your fics there are little things that stick out, but then I forget about them like the whole Quatra mumbling thing. Your trivia is great for helping me to remember, after all it is the little things that make a story good.
As to this chapter, I must say that I really enjoyed the HeeroXRelena scene. I know your focus is not on them, but I'm a 1XR romantic and can't help focusing on their little moments.
But Viscotti's story is really good too! It's like reading a whole new series, you know, like if its not really a Gundam Wing fic. But the characters are still there.
Anyway great job, and since you have been posting dayly, I wont have to wait long for the next chapter, right?
Can't wait.
As to this chapter, I must say that I really enjoyed the HeeroXRelena scene. I know your focus is not on them, but I'm a 1XR romantic and can't help focusing on their little moments.
But Viscotti's story is really good too! It's like reading a whole new series, you know, like if its not really a Gundam Wing fic. But the characters are still there.
Anyway great job, and since you have been posting dayly, I wont have to wait long for the next chapter, right?
Can't wait.
\"A common mistake that people make when trying to design something completely foolproof was to understimate the ingenuity of complete fools.\" -- Douglas Adams Mostly Harmless Book 5 of The Hitchhiker''''s Guide to the Galaxy
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0mikr0n
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I might have to hold off for a little bit, I got school this next week, and then I'm done-- wait, no. Frickin' summer school... gah... I just hope I get my restriction lifted. If I do, I can write to my heart's contentment.
Yes, I included the 1XR moments to emphasize how connected they are, and that they understand each other, despite their inversely disproportional emotions and feelings. This is important later on.
Yes, I included the 1XR moments to emphasize how connected they are, and that they understand each other, despite their inversely disproportional emotions and feelings. This is important later on.