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Beautiful Distraction; 1xR, G

Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 2:23 pm
by mainime
Title: Beautiful Distraction
Day/Theme: January 25: From the edge of the deep green sea; February 17: unbound hair;
Series: Gundam Wing AC
Character/Pairing: Heero x Relena
Rating: G
Notes: Standard Disclaimers apply. I own nothing from Gundam Wing. For blackrose. :) Edited slightly for here... I've become quite a victim of drabble at 31_days. So here, I've combined two drabbles for two different themes into one short fic that may or may not make sense. ^^;;


There are days when he sits at the shoreline and watches as the sun rises pink in the sky. And then he waits for the pink hues to disappear into blues and he watches how the water changes color with the sky, reflecting it like a glass mirror.

The shallower waters are different, he notices. Instead of the same crystal blues, they color into green. He is reminded of her eyes, beautiful and achingly deep. They reveal his soul in their depths and he drowns in them again and again and again.

She waits for him before nightfall. Her eyes never change. Always a deep green and they look at him with a longing that is only matched by her patience and the kindness of her heart.

He no longer waits at the shoreline...


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In his eyes, she would always be the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. In his heart, she would always be the only one who knew him better than he knew himself.

The sun could blind him, but she could restore his sight. With every lingering touch of her fingers on his skin, he felt pieces of his shattered spirit come together. Yet with every tear she shed, he would come unglued the most.

How was it possible that one smile from her could lift his burdens? How was it possible that the moment she uttered his name, he felt he was home?

Reaching up slowly, he released her sun-streaked hair from the pins that held it back, watching how her eyes never wavered and held his gaze just as steadily as he held hers.

"It's simple, Relena," Heero whispered as he slowly tucked her hair behind her ears and cupped her face in his hands, beholding her loveliness. "You're more real than anything in this world."

Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 9:08 pm
by GundamVixen
Awwwww!!! that's CUTE!!!

The description was beautiful! it connected perfectly with every idea and it wasn?t chopped up! Good job!

Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 11:55 pm
by takisha16
I loved it!!! *_*
This was Heero in 'romance mode', and It definitely worked out quite well, it fit
his persona perfectly and it wasn't overly cheesy or flat out no emotion at all.
I loved his comparisson of Relena's eyes to the sea, that's exaclty her eye
color and some people seem to think they're green or sky blue! :-?
What a way to woo a woman! I seriously would have fallen for him again just
by having him cup my face like that! Awesome job! Short and sweet! :wink:

Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 12:03 am
by AislinOriel
That was very pretty. Said everything without saying too much.

Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 8:07 am
by perfectpeach
lveoly poetic language. you can see that you havw a prominent style thorugh these little ficletts ^^

Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 10:40 am
by Andrea
*melts* Oh, gosh... so lovely and romantic.

*goo*

Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:32 pm
by lildragonfly
that's sweeet....

Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 10:12 am
by mainime
Wow, thanks for the feedback guys! :) I was honestly unsure about this drabble. ^^;; It didn't make much sense to me and I guess I was paranoid about posting it up. ^^;;

Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 11:47 am
by dragonlady9
Oh my goodness, I completely understand!!!!! :cry: They DO balance eachother out quite nicely, don't they? (Alchemy) Keep up the good work friend! :lol:

Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 11:50 am
by dragonlady9
:lol: He, HE, he! I just noticed this on my pic that I had set in place last night: WHO is "Kyo"? Later...