MY first fanfic, need help!

[Sovereign of Silence]

ah yes i am trying to become a writer but unfortunately my skills are crap. i got so many ideas for a story i just can't write it out on paper. m first story is a K x Kaoru story ,sad in the fact its my first which should be a heero and relena but their so hard to write about i got a plot but dunno what to write for them.

[Sovereign of Silence]

oh i forgot something oh yea the K x K idea its that thing where kenshin teaches n' kaoru is the student but mines got a twist n' its different other than the student love teacher thing but i need smeway how they hook up or what he teaches , help?

[GundamVixen]

By writing your improving your own skills. Try to write every day and go back at your drafts and read them and see if you like them. Try looking at them from a reader P.O.V and decide if things you have written about make sense or not.
It's also a good idea to read a lot, of books (or in some cases Fics! ^^) and try analyzing other people?s styles. Look out how they write and think for a minute how you want to write. What sorts of emotions you want to trigger from the readers and the emotions your want to convey from your charries.

I know that when I write I think from my characters P.O.V what he or she is seeing and what they are feeling. I then go back and read it over and make sure that's how my charrie would respond or react, if it feels right to me. I correct it, and keep working on it until I feel it's complete.

With your fic idea I know how you feeling being stuck. That usually happens to me. All I can really tell you is start writing and see where it goes. If you don't like it you can always chuck it in the bin and start another draft, or you can build from a specific part that you like and go from there. Your writer?s block will eventually be gone. Just remember, try and stay true to the characters.

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[angel222]

*cough* if you need help figuring out some plots...I got too many plotbunnies so I'm will to help

[Sovereign of Silence]

even when i do have the idea what i want i'm not sure how to write it

[Sovereign of Silence]

ok the plot its a crossover with gundam wing characters - wufie, sally, cathrine and some one else and who the plot a serial killer is on the loose taking pleasure in peling the skin off his victims , especially young ladies ,problem no one where he is ,kaoru lives with a roomate while going to college and ends up falinh for her teach who recently moved to the town and coincedently young girls are being killed , mutilated. .. thats just some of it its not the whole think i'm not sure what do u think ?

[dragonlady9]

Sounds very scary and suspensful ... I like! However, ummm... who are kaoru and K?

[Sovereign of Silence]

you dunno kaoru and kenshin its kool samurai x the series the awesome red hair assassin n' his beautiful tomboyish love of his life :razz: