I need help!

Jackie · Post by **Jackie** » Mon Oct 10, 2005 2:51 pm

So I love the 13x11 pairing. I've got this story called "Roses" that I wanna write, but I'm stuck. :-? The basic gist of the story is that Treize decides to come back three years after being "dead," but he wants to give Lady Une a heads up. His plan: to send her a dozen roses over the span of a dozen days, each with a note and a clue. Kind of like the twelve days of christmas, though that certainly was not my intention. I've got the notes written and all figured out. I need the clues!! *bangs head into wall* Anyone got any ideas?? What clues would he send? I promise I'll share credit!

Caliborn · Post by **Caliborn** » Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:37 pm

I think it would be cute if, in addressing the final note, he called her "Lady." ^_^ Not "Dear Une," or "Dear Ms. Une", but simply "Lady." ^_^ Thus, if Une had ever had any doubts, they would vanish...

Jackie · Post by **Jackie** » Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:42 pm

Caliborn wrote:I think it would be cute if, in addressing the final note, he called her "Lady." ^_^ Not "Dear Une," or "Dear Ms. Une", but simply "Lady." ^_^ Thus, if Une had ever had any doubts, they would vanish...

Yeah, but I'm looking more for actual clues. Like the first one he sends her is a piece of Tallgeese. I'm honestly considering taking the clues out completely and just doing the roses and notes... That's warning enough, right?? Then again, I vow not to be defeated by writer's block!!

Jackie · Post by **Jackie** » Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:44 pm

Edit: That's Tallgeese II; why can't I edit on this page??

Caliborn · Post by **Caliborn** » Thu Oct 20, 2005 3:14 pm

Oooh! Hardcore evidence? I think the roses would be enough. Bits of Specials uniforms or ... bath oils. ^_~ Other than that, I dunno... Treize didn't really have that many material things associated solely with him...

Jackie · Post by **Jackie** » Thu Oct 20, 2005 3:32 pm

Caliborn wrote:Oooh! Hardcore evidence? I think the roses would be enough. Bits of Specials uniforms or ... bath oils. ^_~ Other than that, I dunno... Treize didn't really have that many material things associated solely with him...

*rams head into wall* Yeah... That's the problem...

Jackie · Post by **Jackie** » Thu Oct 20, 2005 3:33 pm

(Blast!! Where's my edit button?? :x )

Though the bath oils is something I didn't think of... :-? It'd be rather strange, though, don't you think??

Caliborn · Post by **Caliborn** » Thu Oct 20, 2005 8:20 pm

Well, I doubt he could fit bubbles in an envelope. ^_^

But just maybe one of those little vials of bath oil or something? I... just don't know...

Jackie · Post by **Jackie** » Fri Oct 21, 2005 8:14 am

Caliborn wrote:Well, I doubt he could fit bubbles in an envelope. ^_^

But just maybe one of those little vials of bath oil or something? I... just don't know...

"Take a bath, Lady Une!"
" :-? Mr. Treize...??"

Caliborn · Post by **Caliborn** » Fri Oct 21, 2005 10:20 am

*Cracks up*

More like, "Would you draw me a bath and stand there giving me my reports while I relax in my rose-fragrent bubbles?"

^_^

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