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Don't Talk Back - NC-17

Post by melodrama »

1xR Lemon - Rated NC 17

I was having the most interesting discussion with my Lady in Waiting the other day, Relena began, her tone smooth, almost conversational.

We were discussing you, in fact. Did you know, she suggested that as the Queen of the Universe, it is well within my right to simply take whatever I desire? Do you think that sounds unreasonable?
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Part Three - If You Love Something, Set it Free
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Part Two - The Predator Becomes the Prey
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Part Four - If It Comes Back, It's Yours
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Post by Mizaya »

I can't believe this has no reviews after so many people have looked at it! Wimps, not wanting to admit that they loved the lemony goodness. :wink:

This was so perfect! I loved the way you made them so IC, running in circles around each other and not admitting to their feelings like they should. Makes you want to smack them upside the head and lock them in a bedroom together for a week, doesn't it? Lol, you did in a way. I've got a big stupid grin on my face because this was just so well-written, steamy, adorable, touching, [insert other complimentary adjectives] :bounce:
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Post by Alilamba »

Oh, I'm so impressed! You can get so much across in such compressed little paragraphs..so skillful. I much, much enjoyed. :salute: Excellent writing! My dad is from Nottingham (I noticed "trousers" and the -t's on the end of words instead of the american -ed's)..are you anywhere close to there?

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Post by Primus2021 »

I give this fic an A+++++++++++++, Great stuff, I once read that dreams are 3 things 1. Your deepest & truest desiers, 2. Memories of a past life, & 3. The link to memories surprest. in this fic 1 & 3 apply. I read the last part twice & found 3 things 1. theres a 5th chapter, 2. Your planning a sequel, or 3. both. I loved this fic & plan to rread more.

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"1xR FOREVER!!!!!!!!!"

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