Unknown Ninja Girl! -----> continuing from chap. 5

Uzumaki Naruto, considered the least talented of his class, has finally graduated on his fourth attempt to become a Shinobi. Along with his two teammates, Haruno Sakura, the girl he has a crush on, and Uchiha Sasuke, his rival and prodigy of their class, he begins an adventure to grow stronger in order to become the next Hokage

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Unknown Ninja Girl! -----> continuing from chap. 5

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Chapter Six

Summary: The truth about her parents death and a battle between Unknown Ninja Girl! and the Rain Ninjas


?Uncle, I?m going to the village to go buy food.? Said Luyana as she went upstairs

?Yeah. Be back for training.? He yelled out from the living room

When Luyana got in her room she took out a black shirt, navy blue sweater to cover the symbol behind the shirt, putted on her ninja shoes, head protector and then she took off to the village.


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When she enters the village all she could thinks was to go search for her friends. ?even though they don?t remember me.. At least I see their faces then I?ll be happy.? Luyana thought to herself while shopping for food. When she was done, she started to walk around the village, while walking around she saw Naruto. She decided to follow him because she thinks that it might lead to the others.

When Naruto got to the Team 7 meeting area Sakura and Sasuke was already there.


?I?m always the last one, but Kakashi-sensei is going to the late again.? Said Naruto

?How lame, making us late again. What?s the training today?? said Sasuke

?Gosh so TIRED! I didn?t even have time to blow dried my hair.? Sakura whined


Luyana decided to walk pass them to see is they?ll tried to talk to her or not.

?Hey girl in the Red-Hair, do you know where Kakashi-sensei?? Asked Nartuo

Luyana paused and turn around to say ?Has such no manners you BLOND-HEADED BOY!?

?Ahh.. Blond??

?Well you are blond right??

?Stop it you two.? Said Sakura getting mad

?Very well I?ll be going.? Said Luyana while walking past Sasuke she tuned to him and smiled at him with her most cheerful smile

?Who was that girl?? asked Kakashi who just got to the meeting place

?A girl who has red hair.? Naruto answered Kakashi?s questions

?Shut up you blond headed boy.? Said Sasuke closing his eyes

?Ha-ha that?s what that girl called Naruto.? Said Sakura while laughing

?Hey Kakashi-sensei, can you tell us about that ninja..? said Naruto

?Oh, ho ho.. The leaders and I don?t know anything about her yet.?

?A she?? Sakura question him

?Yes, it?s a girl, pretty impressive for a girl to be really that strong?

?How lame? said Sasuke

?That is not lame SASUKE! I bet if you and that ninja fought together she?ll win you.? Said Naruto

?Well lets go training.? Kakashi suggested

???????????.


When Luyana got inside her house she saw her uncle on the kitchen floor bleeding to death!

?Uncle! Uncle! Wake up! Don?t leave me!? She yelled out while shaking him

?Luyana?. The rain? kill them? avenge for your parents and my death?..? he said very weakly

?But I thought---? she got cut off from her uncle

?I lied.. Before your parents left to the kill the Rain Ninja. They left you here and told me to live in their house? you didn?t know because your mother had putted a spell on you, the sleeping spell. They came back to get you Luyana.?

?What do they want with me!?

?Everything, my dear??

?What??

?You?re a missing nin in many villages. Haven?t you realized that? Why do you think so many ninjas want you and why do they keep on sending spies to go after you but you always end up killing you.?

?This can?t be happening? why am I wanted for? Tell me.?

?The sword?. Your mother?s swords? they are the.. Only one.. That can?..destroy Mt. Fuji?s barrier?. For get about this and go get ready to kill them for your people. Good bye..? he said as he closed his eyes with a smile.

?NO! DON?T GO! COME BACK TO ME? DON?T LEAVE ME ALONG?!? she cried out?she kept on shaking him but he never opened his red eyes? Luyana know for the fact that he died already?. After about 5 minutes of crying she finally got a hold of herself? She stood up and went to her room to put on the Navy blue clothes

(a/n: it?s the same one just that it?s in different color.)

When she got done dressing herself she took her uncle?s body and buried him behind the house

?I?ll avenge your death! I?ll make your wish comes true. If I died?. Wait for me in heaven.? Said Luyana crying. After she got done praying to her uncle and the heaven God she headed towards the directions where she can smell the Rain Ninjas Chakaras.

While running towards those directions she met Sakura while she was training herself.

?WAIT!? Sakura yelled out for her to stop ? Luyana turned around to see Sakura.

?What do you want?? Luyana ask in a very cold voice

?Where are you going? Right after you left my team and I looked for you??

?A place..?

?Can I come with you?? Sakura asked nervously

?Hmm... sure you can bring them? just tried to keep up..?

?Hold on, let me tell them..?


???????????.


?Sasuke, Naruto, and Kakashi-sensei..? said Sakura

?Yeah, what?s up?? asked Naruto

?Well.. I saw the black ninja?-? Sakura was cut be Sasuke

?Really? Where??

?Over there, and she?s going somewhere.. I think she?s going to battle someone.. And is headed to this place..?

?Well what are we waiting for lets go.? Said Naruto

?Wait! We still have to train here, we are not going anywhere. And that is a final order.? Said Kakashi

?But we might find out who this girl really is..? said Sasuke

?Hai Hai??

?Follow me.? Said Sakura running to where she saw the ninja

When they got there they saw a navy ninja leaning next to a tree, but they knew that it was the same person.


?If you all want to follow me that much.. Just tried to keep up with me, I hate people that slows me down on this very important mission of mines.? Said Luyana who took off.

While following her, Sasuke notice the symbol and asked her ?Hey Ninja??

?What do you want?? Said Luyana

(A/n: Just to let you know that no one know about her name yet? I?m just putting it on so it won?t confuse you guys?)

?Why do you the Uchiha and Uzumaki symbol?? Sasuke asked her ? that got everyone?s attentions

?Tsk that?s none of your business.?

?Business this business that.? Said Naruto

?If you don?t like me, then go back home.?

?Who says I hate you.. I don?t, I think you?re cool? now way I?m not going back because there might be some enemies out there.?

?Smart boy, there.?

When they got there, all of Team 7?s eyes widen..

?The Valley of the End..?? Said Naruto

?Yes.. The Valley of the End.. It?s such a perfect title for this valley, because I?m going to end some people?s lives here. RAIN NINJAS I KNOW THAT YOU?RE HERE SO SHOW YOUR UGLY DAMN FACE!? Yelled Luyana

?Smart girl there..? Said Rain ninja #1 as all of the others came out the tress

?Oh you brought some help huh.. That?ll be fun..? Said Rain ninja #2

?Stop talking and fight!? Luyana yelled while drawing her sword and run towards them


?Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!? --- Naruto

?Katon Gokakyouu no Jutsu!? --- Sasuke

?Earth Destruction no Jutsu!? -- Sakura

?Water Dragon no Jutsu!? ? Kakshi

?Ice Strike no Jutsu!? ? Luyana


After the battle, there was only on left remain frozen, after what he saw the whole fight her was totally scared! ?Please don?t kill me?

Luyana ignored and kept up walk to the Rain ninja with her sword pointing to that ninja.

?Please don?t kill me!?

?You think making you escape out of my face will bring back my family! Huh? Your village murders my family and you think I?ll let you escape! DIE? she said as she threw her sword to the ninja?s head then she walk to the dead ninja and took out the blood stained sword from the man?s face. Suddenly without realizing it she started to cried really hard.

?Sorry about your lost.? Said Sakura

?Go away..?

?But..?

?JUST GO WILL YOU!? she yelled out while putting the sword next to her heart.

?What are you doing?? Asked Sasuke

?I don?t want to live anymore? I don?t want to be along!?

?What are you doing? Trying to kill yourself? You think doing that well make them happy up in the heavens? I don?t think so, they may kill your family but you must live for them!?

?You do not even understand the word ?alone? when someone dies the person you love so much died in front of you! You know the real pain.?

?Yes, I do? I never had a family and friends until I became a real ninja. My world was filled with love, hope, happy, determination about the next day will be like. I may be alone when all my friends go up to their mom and dad for a hug, I felt jealous but I didn?t care because my friends are my family.?

?You?re right? but.. I miss them so muc---? she was cut off due to that she collapse to the ground.

?She must?ve used too much power on them. Lets take her back to the village.? Said Kakashi picking her up


A/n: hope you guys like this chapter.. I know it was long.. Please tell me if my story is good so far in the reviews?


Chapter Seven


Summary: Luyana?s dream and her chat with Team 7

Chapter Seven: Luyana?s Dream and Team 7

Luyana?s Dream

?Wake up? Wake up me darling?? a lady whispered softly

?uh?hmmm..?

?Wake up, Lyuana??

?YES, I?M AWAKE!?

?How dare of you to shout at me.? The lady said rudely

?Nani? Who are you??

?Why it is me, your mother.?

?M? Mother?? Luyana asked as she looks at the lady with long reddish peach hair

?Yes, darling. Your mother Rikana.?

With no doubt Luyana ran into her mother?s arms

?Mother, if you really did love me... why did you and father left me??

?Luyana. It was our time to go; besides I chose that path. You still have a long way.?

?How do you know? My future hasn?t been determined yet??

?I know. I?m sorry, but I have to leave honey. Luyana don?t forget that you?re born by the famous ninjas in Konoha. Your father Uchiha Kamui and I, Uzumaki Rikana the best ninjas in their own clans.?

?MOM! Don?t GO!?

?I?m sorry.? Said the lady as she fade away

?MOTHER!? Luyana cried out as she rose from her bed

?omg... that was only a dream? is that lady really my mother? It felt so real though??

As she looked around she didn?t recognize anything at all ?HUH! This is not my room? where the heck am I??

Luyana looked around deeper into the unknown room. As she enters a rook that looked like a bathroom she looked to her left to face a big mirror. My mask is still on? Yes, thank GOD! whoever took me in must has a lot respect for me face. But if they did... then I have to kill them tonight.? She kept looking at herself until she notices that her green sword was gone from her sight. ?SHIT! Where is my sword!? She got of the bathroom and started to look around the room for her sword. While looking around Luyana didn?t notice that four people just enter the room.

?What are you doing! And what are you looking for!? Someone yelled at her

Luyana turn back to face team seven

?You guys took me in?? Luyana asked coldly

?Of course! We had too. You?re one lucky one, because Sakura knows how to heal, with out her you?ll be dead a week ago.? Said Kakashi

?I?ve slept here for a week? HELL NAH! Forget that where the heck is my sword??

?Oh! You mean this?? Naruto ask as he show the sword to her

?Give that back you pipsqueak!? She shouts at him

?NO WAY!?

?And why is that, HUH? It?s mine not yours.?

?You gotta answer my question?? He said with a smirk

With no patience Luyana speed up to Naruto and took the sword from him within three seconds

?What? What? The Sword?? Naruto asked himself as he looks at his hands

?Now that I?ve got my sword. Where the heck am I??

?Why, Konoha Village?s hospital, DUH!? Sasuke replied

?Konoha? hahah heheh?

?What?s so funny?? He asked in a lame voice

?Nothing. I never came here in my ninja outfit but in my real self.?

?EY! You still need to answer my damn question!? Naruto yelled

?What??

?Who are you??

?That is the lamest question ever! And that is not your concern? She replied as she step back

?Why are you stepping back?? Sakura asked

?If I can?t go through the front there?s always the back.? Luyana answered as she jump out of the window

Naruto and the others rush to the window only to see nothing but the ground only.

?That was fast.? Said Sakura

?Yes, well I?m off to see Hokage-sama. You guys are free to go remember training at 8:00 a.m.?

?Hai.?

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A/N: tell me what you guys think? reviews! Reviews!

Thanks to those who reads my story!

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