Disclaimer: I don't own gundam wing.
Author: Criticgundam
This is mostly my brain farting, but I thought it was a good idea so what the heck.
Herro's first poem.
For once in her life, Relena Yuy woke up late. Her husband's eforts to tire her out last night had been sucessful. She brushed a lone strand of hair away from her face. She sat up to find that the man she'd been married too for one year to the day was not in bed with her. She went to the rest room to freashen up to find that all her things were orginized and the room was filled with sweet smelling roses.
She followed a trail of rose pedals down the stairs and into the kitchen where breakfast laid prepared on the table and chair pulled out awaiting to seat her beautiful body. As she sat, Herro emerged dressed in a robe holding a piece of paper in his hand.
He seated her gracefull and walked to the other side of tha table. There he stood in front of her and unfolded the paper in his hand. He took a nervous deep breath, and stared at her in a loving gaze almost as if the site of her had calmed his nerves.
Gently, he said, 'My darling, whom I have had the great blessing of being wed to for a year now, I decided to write a poem to exprese all my love for you:
R is for the romance that we have had together,
E is for the exciting times we had together,
L is for the love we'd shared,
E is for the experiences we've been through for better or for worse,
N is for the never ending love we'll always have, and
A is for haveing the most beautiful ass I have ever seen.
Relena smiled at her lover. She got up and came up to Herro who seemed to be holding his breath waiting for an answer. Herro tried to hold his composure and asked, 'Did you like it?' Relena kissed him and said, 'Come to bed and I'll tell you what I think.' 'I can do that,' Herro said through his grin.
Herro and Relena went up stairs and shortly after, the house echoed with moans of love and pleasure. Needless to say, Relena was impressed.
Herro's first poem
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Herro's first poem
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Worth 34,000,000 chocolate gold coins dead or alive.
I am known as the Donut...
Posted by the Owner and Manager of Critic''s Bar at Gendou and Quinta Essentia.com
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Very nice... for brain farting!!!!!
yeah...I wish my brain could fart like that, no seriously finals week in college suck!!!!
awesome job, I loved how the poem was really cheesy and ended with a remark on her ass!
smooth Heero, REAL smooth! jajajja
welll....relena bought it!!!
I never imagined Heero as the poet!
You made him sound romatic, mysterious, and still as serious as Heero could ever be all in a short span of words!
nothing like and early pick me up!

yeah...I wish my brain could fart like that, no seriously finals week in college suck!!!!

awesome job, I loved how the poem was really cheesy and ended with a remark on her ass!

welll....relena bought it!!!

I never imagined Heero as the poet!
You made him sound romatic, mysterious, and still as serious as Heero could ever be all in a short span of words!
nothing like and early pick me up!

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