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Tricky scenes

Post by Beer-monster »

I thought it might be interesting/instructive to get peoples opinion on which type of scenes they find particularly hard to write.

Introspectives get you down or do you hate long coversations and lines of dialogue. Do you find your lemons sour and are you beating yourself up trying to write fights.

So what scenes do you struggle, romance, angst, comedy? We all have a few right (with the possible exception of Rose *grovels at her talent*)?

Who knows if you share maybe someone will be able to help you.

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Post by Calla Lily »

Personally, any action scene, lemons, or limes give me heart attacks - I just don't write those often so I become - well, paranoid about it.
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Post by AnShino »

any action scene, lemons, or limes give me heart attack
With the exception of limes, I can't write the aforementioned if you gave me all the time in the world. I'm a stickler for detail so.. anything I haven't actually experienced myself or haven't done really, really, really thorough research on makes me paranoid about it.
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Post by perfectpeach »

I can't do action scenes. But, I'm gonna have to eventually for one of my fics and I keep trying to put it off by putting in mindless speeking.

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Post by Beer-monster »

Ah yes action scenes...they are very tricky to write. Though I may know of someone who has experience in writing a few, whether they can be considered good :roll:
Have you had your recommended daily allowance of ravishing? 8)

I believe in love stories but despise romances.

I want to write fics that slap all the standard fanfiction conventions around the face with
a wet fish and call them Betsy ~ me to Wicked.

Cupid's arrow is really a nuclear warhead...it leaves total devastion in it wake.

http://www.fanfiction.net/~beermonster

http://www.rakhal.com/florestica/beermonster/index.html

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Post by melrose_stormhaven »

lemons and action scenes. I detest them at times, but I have to write them.

It's not so much as writing them as getting in the mood to write them that bugs me. And finding the right words to use, of course.

I also have difficulties writing angst, because, believe it or not, I don't know what the hell angst is supposed to be. What constitutes angst, anywy? *blink* *blink*

Oh yeah...I'm not good writing fluff...or comedy at times...XD
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Post by Beer-monster »

Chambers 20th century English dictionary:

Angst: anxiety especially a general feeling of anxiety produced by awareness of the uncertainties and paradoxes inherent in being human.

Beer's eternally blunt dictionary

Angst: The "damned if you do, damned if you don't" syndrome.

Not that I'm particularly experienced or talented writer, but I guess I;ve jotted down a few sucky lines that could be referred to as angst.

In my writing angst is essentially introspection and over-thinking that your characters does when caught between a rock and a hard place. We are talking classical Shakespearean sililoquys here, like in Hamlet "To be or not to be" etc.

Life occasionally fixes us with the sadistic choice, such is being alive. When you are in a situation where no matter which path you take your and others are going to be hurt. When your character realises they are in such a predicament they often take a step back to lament about the situation, and consider the consequences eventually becoming more anxious and depressed as they realise they can't win and are essentially buggered.

Classic example being some form of love triangle.

For example Heero loves Relena, but Relena is with some other guy and is very happy (and no the other guy is not a creep/abuser or other general bastard for onec). Heero is faced with the decision, takes a risk and tell Relena and possibly ruin her current happiness or be miserable watching the one he loves with someone else. The tension of such a cross roads would eat him up...thus angst.

Hm that sounds familiar :-?

Other variants could be that Duo is cheating on Hilde, and Relena is torn between telling Hilde and ruining their relationship or keeping secret and stuck with the knowledge Duo is doing wrong.

A plot I used from Ranma 1/2 was Ryoga togther and faced with the choice, ask Akane if she still loves Ranma and be broken by her answer if she says yes, or leaving things as they are and sharing a loveless relationship with ghosts.


Angst could also come post-decision where the character laments about a choice they made that changed everything, how they made the wrong choice. Alchohol helps this happen :D

Taking a consequence of the first example, Heero tells Relena he loves her when drunk. heero is now wracked with the stupidity of his slip and thinks he may have ruined Relena's relationship with both him and the other guy. Relena wonders if she may have lingering feelings for Heero whilst plagued by the knowledge she cares greatly for the other guy. Double angst.

Hm...I'm just asking for a prodding aren't I? :-?

Anyway I hope that clarifies at least how I define angst and how I dealt with it in my stories. Angst I think makes a more powerful piece of writing because you can really pull out the tradgedy of the predicament and the reader really gets to identify with any character and feel for them and is moved by their choice.

Though it is worth nothing, not having a happy ending (often with smut), though poignant, will get you lynched. :(

Thats my rant over :salute:
Have you had your recommended daily allowance of ravishing? 8)

I believe in love stories but despise romances.

I want to write fics that slap all the standard fanfiction conventions around the face with
a wet fish and call them Betsy ~ me to Wicked.

Cupid's arrow is really a nuclear warhead...it leaves total devastion in it wake.

http://www.fanfiction.net/~beermonster

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Post by perfectpeach »

wow....essay^^;;

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Post by Beer-monster »

wow....essay^^;;

Sorry :oops:
Have you had your recommended daily allowance of ravishing? 8)

I believe in love stories but despise romances.

I want to write fics that slap all the standard fanfiction conventions around the face with
a wet fish and call them Betsy ~ me to Wicked.

Cupid's arrow is really a nuclear warhead...it leaves total devastion in it wake.

http://www.fanfiction.net/~beermonster

http://www.rakhal.com/florestica/beermonster/index.html

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Post by Penybright »

My weaknesses would have to be... lemons, (though I've never really tried to write one...) comedy, and generally happy things. *shifty eyes* What can I say? I can write angst even when I'm in the best of moods. Action scenes are hard, I will admit, but I've managed to muck my way through those. Oh, and when writing action, I encounter the problem of "hey, I know what this term is, but will the common reader?"

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