The son of a peace fighter and peace maker

[Pure]

Title-The Son of a Peace fighter and a Peacemaker
Author-Pure
Summary-Relena dies and Heero takes it hard, this is his opinion on his family and how he feels about the incident and the time after

Hi my name is Aiden and my father was once the most feared man in Earth and the colonies I mean he was a Gundam pilot he?s Heero Yuy. He was the reason we had peace for so long, him and my mom Relena Peacecraft kept peace going even during the little scuttles people tried to have to create a stir and disrupt the peace. The Preventers, my aunts and uncles made up the G-elite, stopped them. My aunts were Hilde, Catherine, Sally, Noin and Dorothy the uncles were Duo, Trowa, Quatre, Wufei and Zechs. They were around constantly they kept dad sane and human, they also kept mom fun and fresh instead of boring and old like the other diplomats. Uncle Duo would do anything in his power to make mom laugh and dad want to kill him it?s just how he got dad to relax.

People didn?t know my family the way I did, they each had a part and they played it beautifully for the camera and public but only a small few knew the real Yuy family. Mom changed her name from Peacecraft to Yuy the public ignored it though always called her Relena Peacecraft-Yuy and she would just smile and ignore it cause the one?s who really mattered called her Mrs. Yuy she earned it putting up with dad for all those years before he became ?human? and finally married her. They still laugh and tease my parents about how they met each other, but honestly I wouldn?t mind finding a girl I would go through all that he did just for her cause my mom is so worth it! People think of her as some weak doll but she?s not, she?s not a fighter either but she?s anything but weak she?ll play with dad and they play rough or with Uncle Wufei. She uses her silver tongue to put out even the smallest of sparks to preserve peace and our home. Dad just nods behind her or gives the cold front since he?s her body guard he?s been her body guard since she was the vice foreign minister and he says it won?t change now that she?s the president.

I want to become a Preventer when I finish high school my parents are ok with it but they would like me to go to college first I think they don?t want me to experience what they did, I kind of did we learned about it in History Class and boy was I shocked that my parents survived that. I don?t want to have to survive something like that but I do want to keep peace like them or save some country or something I think it would be exciting. Well dad decided if was going to be a Preventer I had to train and we did even though mom was un happy but she dutifully cleaned all my cuts and wrapped ribs, helped Aunt Sally set bones and stuff. I know she and dad had discussions but she agreed I had to get a taste of it to make sure I wanted to go through it daily which I did.

Life was perfect until one night mom had to go away but dad couldn?t come with even though he objected and went through reasons why he should go with but mom used her silver tongue to sooth him by saying uncle Duo and Trowa would be with her not to mention uncle Quatre and aunt Dorothy since they had to show they were both diplomats themselves. Well the conference went ok and she didn?t speak all that much just her presence was enough to get the old stiff aristocrats to see reason. She was leaving the place, dad and I sat on the edge of our seats knowing she would smile and give a signal that only we knew but before she could make it a horrible sound reached our ears and she fell her gown turned crimson instantly and people began to shout and scream it was total chaos.

Dad was in a panic and jumped up to make all the calls he could to different contact he had with Preventers and then we took a Preventers? private shuttle and reached the colony and rushed to the hospital. I hate hospitals from now on, the smell of antiseptics and other nauseating smells will forever be linked to hospitals. We walked into the waiting room and were met with our silent family Duo looked up and said, ?Sorry man I should?ve had her away from the crowd but she wanted to look into the camera to give her special signal I?m sorry.?

Heero shook his head and accepted the friendly hug, ?No wasn?t your fault or Trowa?s it was the sniper and I hope you really throw the book at him.?

Trowa nodded, ?He?s been captured and they?re interrogating him to see if he?s part of a new faction but factions have been disbanded for years they?ve been enjoying peace as much as we have. So this fool just did it for the fame or kicks of whatever twisted thing caused him to shoot her.?

The others nodded and soon the room was filled with family then the doctor walked in looking grim, ?I?m sorry Mr. Yuy but your wife was shot in the chest and unfortunately it hit her lung she?s on a respirator but that?s not all she has internal bleeding we stopped as best we could but there is internal damage that?s extensive. I?m sorry she won?t last through the night but it?ll be long enough to say your goodbyes.?

He shook his head again sadly and walked out dad looked at me and said, ?C?mon son let?s be with our woman.? I nodded and followed him to her room.

She didn?t look my mom she was pale and very fragile looking all these tubes hooked up to her and the machine breathing for her. I wanted to cry but was afraid dad would think me weak but he didn?t care he was too busy crying himself. He walked over to her and said, ?Relena ashiteru c?mon love you survived a war and me trying to kill you baby I know you can survive this. Please love I need you, Aiden needs you I don?t know how to be a father like you?re his mother, one minute you?re Relena Peacecraft president of ESUN and then you?re just my wife and his mom. Love I don?t know how to be Heero Yuy perfect soldier and body guard to Relena Peacecraft and then be your husband and his father you?re the one who can get me to mellow out and be with you and him. Love he?ll need you to tell him what a girl wants in a guy or what presents a girl should have I don?t know.?

Mom?s soft voice spoke, ?Oh my Heero you?ll learn Aiden will be patient and he can ask his Aunts. Don?t forget your humanity Heero you earned it after the war just because I won?t be with you doesn?t mean I?m not with you in spirit. I will always be with you keeping my eye on my men making sure you don?t forget each other or get lost in the darkness that?s waiting to swallow your souls and humanity. Heero promise me you won?t turn perfect soldier again I don?t think I could survive if you did.?

Heero kissed her hand, ?No baby I won?t go perfect soldier I?ll still be your Heero and only perfect soldier when I?m on duty. Love I don?t want you to go.?

Relena nodded, ?I know my Heero but It?s time I?m getting tired but I want to say good bye to my son.?

I stepped up to her other side and held her other hand, ?I?m here mom. I?ll miss you so much and I don?t want to say goodbye either. Who will tell dad to quit being sarcastic in his head at meetings or tell me all about your love. I don?t want you to go.?

Mom nodded, ?I know baby but your dad and I made up tapes and other books and stuff just incase something happened we didn?t think it be this soon since I didn?t even get to see you to graduate high school and complain about the awful gowns and annoying cap/tassel. I love you both so much but I?m getting so tired I?m sorry I?ll be with you always in your heart.?

She closed her eyes at dad?s gentle request and we felt her sprit leave before the screen went flat but we also felt her spirit hug us showing us she would still be there for us. Our family held us and shared our grief they weren?t mad that they didn?t get to say goodbye cause they had memories of a vibrant woman and knew mom didn?t want them to see her frail and week. A week later we had a private funeral just my aunts and uncles, Pagan, Lady Une and Marimeia. We each said our favorite memory of her it didn?t matter if it was embarrassing cause that was the best and we didn?t wear tuxes and crap mom was so informal unlike what people thought; we wore our best but it wasn?t overly fancy and fake.

Duo?s favorite memory was when Relena first met dad and protected him painting uncle Duo as the bad guy he said no one showed as much fire and guts as my mom did. Trowa?s was one where he and aunt Catherine got mom to try a few tricks for fun so she changed into shorts and tank he said mom looked like dad did cause her tank was green and her shorts were black like his spandex. She did the ones he and Catherine requested and then did some on her own even better than Catherine or himself he said he asked her how she could and she just smirked and said she wasn?t the prissy princess people thought she was she had done gymnastics for years. Quatre?s favorite memory was one where he and Trowa were playing their instruments, Quatre?s violin and Trowa?s flute and they were joined by the piano. He said it was beautiful and he would always remember that even if you come from different backgrounds there are many ways to unite. Wufei?s favorite was when he was fighting dad and dad had ?dishonored? him and it had to be met with blood mom took the dropped katana and cut her hand she still has the scar and said to him blood is blood your honor is now restored.

Dad decided to go last he was still choked up. Hilde said her favorite was during one of their famous shopping trips mom helped her pick out something to knock Duo?s socks off and they talked it was then that Hilde found out about my conception. Catherine remembered making coffee with mom and how mom continued to make sludge we all laughed cause she didn?t get better until she bought instant. Dorothy remembered a time when mom and she were fencing and mom beat her but instead of making a big deal smiled and said that Dorothy could keep her title as best fencer cause it was just beginners luck but Dorothy didn?t buy it and it wasn?t; mom was a really good fencer better than Dorothy but she didn?t care for the credit it was just something fun to do. Dorothy smiled and said she would always be second best to mom even if mom never recognized it. Sally said mom played nurse especially to dad and his wounds and would slightly punish him for being careless or getting on her nerves by putting a little extra antiseptic on a wound or wrapping the bandage a little tighter than needed but they would always kiss and make up. Noin remembered the times she spent with mom during the war and how she had wanted dad to win and kill her brother even if she didn?t know it was him. Zechs stood and said his favorite was where she tried to talk him out dropping Libra onto earth even though dad stood behind her; they?ve put aside their rivalry.

Pagan said his was when mom and he would talk in the pink limo but his all time favorite was her face when she saw the hot pink limo he said it was priceless and wished he had a cameral then to preserve the memory. Lady Une?s favorite was when mom walked into her office with the adoption form already signed and said Marimeia could go home with her whenever she wished. Lady Une was also pleased that mom never held her responsible for her adopted father or the chain reaction of her adopted mom?s death a few years after. Marimeia said hers was when they were talking and mom told her what it was like being just a symbol and to use the people?s stupidity of putting you there and use it for your purposes like mom did. So Marimeia is now the foreign minister and she?s doing what mom told her giving the people a run for their money by actually doing what she says she will which caused the aristocrats to pay money but she doesn?t care they should?ve thought about that during elections. I walked up and spoke about my favorite which was when my parents took me to the beach to the spot where mom found dad it was how they spent their anniversary but when I was little I couldn?t come now that I?m older they let me. Mom said this was where a school girl met a soldier that would change her life in all the good ways and dad would stay silent then lift her in his arms and take her into the ocean and they would dance to music only they could hear but mom would hum or even sing it for me.

I remember hoping I would find a woman like my mom who could tame my dad but also accept whatever changes he wanted to make with her and they were for the better. I love you mom. Dad smiled even though he was crying and stood up next to me and said his favorite was their wedding even though it wasn?t perfect and wasn?t what people thought it would be. Mom and dad eloped because the wedding wasn?t theirs it was the public?s the colors they wanted were blue but the public wanted rose and bashful and then extravagant flowers and food so mom and dad had enough and said screw it and got married on the same beach they go to each anniversary and at sunset they wed and only my aunts and uncles plus Pagan, Lady Une, and Marimeia were there.

Dad and I still go back to the beach each anniversary and on special occasions visit mom?s grave. I was listening to the radio and I heard this song and it reminded me of how dad was right after mom?s death. It?s called walk a little straighter by Billy Currington and dad did get drunk and act like this but he stopped after lectures from my family and realizing mom wouldn?t be pleased so when I graduated from Preventers academy and became a full-fledged Preventer he was completely sober. I could just picture mom smiling happily and being so proud of her men. I?m still looking for that perfect woman but when I find her I know I?ll be lucky if it?s half as special or eternal as my parent?s love. Well this Aiden signing off. Life isn?t perfect but there are little memories and events that make it more than perfect. Dad and I watch her videos every Friday night or right before a mission it keeps us close to her and we know she?s with us like she promised.

I remember looking up to look up to him.
An' I remember, most the time he wasn't there.
I'd be waiting' at the door when he got home at night.
He'd pass me by to go pass out in his chair.
And I'd sing: "Walk a little straighter, Daddy,
You're swaying', side to side.
Your footsteps make me dizzy,
and no matter how I try,
I keep tripping' an' stumbling'.
If you'd look down here, you'd see:
Walk a little straighter, Daddy,
You're leading me.
He stumbled in the gym on graduation day.
An' I couldn't help but feel so ashamed.
An' I wasn't surprised a bit when he didn't stay;
He stumbled out before they called my name.
And I thought, "Walk a little straighter, Daddy,
You're swaying', side to side.
It's not just me who's watching,
you've caught everybody's eye.
And you're tripping' an' stumbling',
And even though I've turned eighteen,
Walk a little straighter, Daddy,
You're still leading me.
The old man's still like he always was,
But I love him anyway.
If I've learned one thing from him,
It's my kids will never have to sing:
"Walk a little straighter, Daddy,
You're swaying', side to side.
Your footsteps make me dizzy,
and no matter how I try,
I keep tripping' an' stumbling'.
If you'd look down here, you'd see:
Walk a little straighter, Daddy,
You're leading me."
"Yeah, walk a little straighter, Daddy,
You're leading me.

It's still true my dad will always lead me and my mom is still keeping watch over us standing faithfully by his side. Now i'm really done...for now.

[Padme]

OK, you got a good idea, but there are too many run-on sentences and grammar mistakes. If you are traying to portray the mindset of someone who is ten or maybe eleven, you can do that by using simple sentence structure, but don't punish the reader with grammar mistakes.

Also, you need to break up your paragraphs. When a new person starts to speak, you make a new paragraph--even if it's only one line.

[perfectpeach]

*wipes tears* I hate character deaths! tthey make me emotional! *goes off crying*
Peach: hehe! good job! you humanised her!