Michael the Archangel 1/? A Sword in Assemblely

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Michael the Archangel 1/? A Sword in Assemblely

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Disclaimer - (I always see these in stories on BI) I do not own the following cartoons/books/videogames (although it would be cool): Inuyasha, Red wall, and Star Craft
>:| but Michael the Archangel is owned by ME NOT U so u cant have him :-P

Once again, Michael was stuck in a boring assembly at his stupid High School. This kid is picked on a lot, but everyone knows he is smart, he is most likely smarter than you at most things :-P . He has brown hair and blue eyes but there are hints of colors that give it a tint of grey. It's almost over the prom queen and king candidates are leaving the floor. Then, a meteor comes out of nowhere, shining white showing a sword beautifully made with a long blade a silver handle with two wings as the shape of the cross-hilt. Zerglings start to go into the auditorium (they are like giant cockroaches, with killer claws) and Michael, driven by some unknown force, picks up the sword. Then he transforms his eyes are brighter blue still a small bit of grey his brown hair lightens and grows and he becomes stronger. THWING!!! An upper slice kills the first zergling, SLICE there goes another SHLACK oooh that is gonna leave a stain. Then a hydralisk (like giant killer praying mantises) appears, red eyed: it?s a Hunter Killer.

Human your time on this earth is at an end GIVE ME THE SWORD!

Michael-WHO SENT YOU!

Who do you think, Lady Kerrigan fool. (A woman with scythes coming out of her shoulders, controls these freaks)NOW YOU WILL DIE. *he lunges*
Michael-You want a fight? Then you'll be disappointed. *throws sword at it* it gets stuck in the wall. Guts: everywhere i'm grossed out thinking bout it.
But this is just the beginning he hears large footsteps

EVERYONE GET OUT INTO THAT HALLWAY
Taylor comes up to him, she is a nice looking girl in his freshman class he likes her, but he doesn't know if the feeling is mutual she has green eyes and nice long brown hair.
Taylor-Michael what?s going on, whets making you shout like that?

Michael- Ultralisk (giant goliath beetle with two sharp claws at the front)

I'll fight it to the death. I have to protect these people.
*it comes and they fight*
Michael swings but the jaw like appendage blocks it.
It slashes out: he barely misses


More zerglings pour in and it looks like he is a goner. Then something or some things happened.

A shining sword with a ruby red pommel sword slashes through a few zerglings

A sacred arrow pierces three of them at once

A machine gun tears through a whole pack of the creatures

And Michael hears something
Sounds like *Kaze no Kizu*
Kaze no Kisu? :-? dont know much japanese but i know that voice from somewhere :eek:

*he jumps out of the way just in time, and the ultralisk is destroyed*

3 heroes and 1heroine of fantasy are alive, and standing in front of Michael
Matthias-Mouse Warrior of Redwall
Jim Raynor-Terran Hero of the future
Kagome-the teenaged miko with magic arrows
Inuyasha-the half demon with a sword made from his own fathers fang
And now Michael, freshman of a regular school and a regular town on a regular world where nothing very magical ever happens, is all screwed up.

Tell me if its good or bad don?t be easy on me give me the really radioactive stuff.
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1st edition's plot had some gaping describation holes so forgive me for that error, im new at the story creation thing

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Post by Little Green Miko »

Wind Scar...? I know what it is-but for best interests- Kaze no Kizu sounds a lot better. :)
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:oops: sorry i don't know much japanese i'm cursed to only watching cartoon network for inuyasha :( so thanks LGM

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NP. Glad my opinion was some help. :D
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Post by Marlin- »

Big production problem with this is that Christmas break will be a vacation in Hawaii then a band event in the Peach Bowl its gonna be sweet but i wont be at home for long the next two weeks.
:eek: 41 views, glad ppl are lookin at it
another major problem is the difference with the english speaking Michael, Jim Raynor, and (for the sake of the argument, he can speak english too)Matthias; and the japanese speaking Inuyasha and Kagome.

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