Well here this is my first fan fiction ever hope you guys like it ... if you don?t well nothing much I can do about now can I ???
Disclaimer: Naruto is not mine but the storyline is ? suing me wont get you a single cent the fanfic I writing is just for others to enjoy....
Author?s note: thanks to everyone who reviewed, I would like to thank Kuwabaras pupil he has been a great help. Also Timeshifter for his ideas and help as well. Incase anyone is joining this story late, I would like to say that all the characters are 17 (why? My story my rules
) so without further ado I present you Naruto: the demon within chap 2Location: the inn (where Naruto and Jiraiya are staying at.)
As they entered the inn Jiraiya stopped blabbering and turned to Naruto ? you feel that??. Naruto nodded, there was a dark aura present in the inn, ?could it be a demon?? he wondered. At that moment ten demons suddenly emerged from the surrounding area, ?they look familiar? naruto thought as he scan his opponents, one of the demons smiled and said: ?did you think I could be killed that easily ha ha ha ha ha?. A grin appeared on Naurto?s face as he remembered the face of the demon he killed earlier (read chap 1): ?Back to die another time demon?? Naurto said as the grin on his face widen even more.
?Ha! this time it will be different.? One demon said. With that all the demons proceeded to charged naruto when all of them were engulfed in a powerful flame.
As more demons appeared Naruto immediately knew that the opponent was an elemental demon as elemental demons were able to replicate themselves given a suitable environment (eg: fire elemental demons can replicate themselves with fire, earth demons with soil etc, what was worse was that the demon actually implant part of their consciousness in the clone making them more powerful than ordinary replicas). Jiraiya shouted as he entered combat: ?I will deal with them, go find the original demon, it will also be a good opportunity to test out your strength?.
?Fine? was the reply he got as Naruto vanish into smoke.
Naruto made his way to the second floor and begin cutting through demon replicas as he made his way to the part of the inn where the demon aura was the strongest.
*Awhile later
?You piece of shit!? Naruto cursed as he finally found the original demon standing in the inn?s suite surrounded by its many clones. ?How the hell did you make so many demons in such a short time??. The demon looked at the visibly exhausted boy and laugh in a gravel tone ?I am a demon what did you expect me to do? Hmm you look tired why don?t you take a nap for ever!? with that the demon shouted ?graveyard crush no justsu !? and Naruto felt the wall slowly closing in, ?I shall leave the dirty work to my clones? the demon prepared to disappeared, but Naruto was having none of that because he knew that if the demon was to escape now it would go around creating more clones and he was fed-up with the stupid clones,
Naruto unsheathed Hellstorm and shouted ?fury strikes? in a blink of an eye surrounding clones were sliced to ribbons in a flash, naruto proceeded to make his way to the original demon and before the demon could vanish grab it arm and using a judo technique slam the demon hard against the wall. The demon roared and tried to swipe naruto with its now extended claws. Naruto block the strike and was about to counter it with a horizontal stab when he felt hellstorm?s blade shattered, ?what the he-? he didn?t have time to complete that thought as he had to focus on dodging the attacks the rock demon were throwing at him.
?Uh oh this looks bad? suddenly Naruto felt a great pain in his abdomen upon looking down he saw a gaping hole near his kidney area. The pain was intense; he had not felt such pain since the day his charka merged with kyuubi?s. ?Hey kid? kyuubi said in the back of his head ?Here is some advice use some water justu followed by electrical justu to amplify the damage?, ?thanks fox I owe you one? Naruto said as he stood up, naruto smiled as his activated his charka once again, his charka now merged with kyuubi?s was a dark black with red outline, Naruto said in a low tone: ?I never thought I would have to activate kyuubi?s power to defeat you.? The demon was stunned, it thought to itself ?he was not at full strength and he already proved to be a difficult opponent I must use all my power and finish him off with one shot? the demon immediately summoned all it?s power for a final attack, the boy across the room laughed a demonic laugh ?going for a final attack so soon? Very well I shall take your attack ?.
The demon snarled, ? do not under estimate me!? with that it shouted ?dark shot!? it palms being to charged a dark ball of energy, the demon with all its might threw the ball of energy at Naruto, the ball hit Naruto and exploded in a huge fireball destroying everything in a foot radius and creating a huge crater. The demon smiled it seems that all was left of it?s opponent was ashes, it proceeded to walk out of the suite when he hear laughter the demons eyes widen in shock as naruto walked out of the crater without a scratch, ?is that all you got?? Naruto said. The demon immediately tried to run when naruto with one powerful ransengan tore a gaping hole in it?s chest, as the demon dies it looked at Naruto and with a face that was of pure shock as it fell dead.
Naruto sighed ?not even a challenge?? he spun around and threw a kunai charged with charka making it impossibly sharp at the area he heard clapping, Jiraiya stepped out of the shadows into the now partially destroyed room still clapping ?Impressive I thought the demon would pose at least some sort of challenge but it looks like I was wrong?.
Naruto turn around to face Jiraiya whose black business suit was stained with demon blood, ?It would have been faster if the sword hadn?t broke what kind of sword was that you gave me anyway?? he asked with a scowl. ?geesh sorry about that to make it up to you I shall give you a gift? Jiraiya said and presented naruto with a package he took out from his jacket. ?Your father Yondaime would have wanted you to have this, it was also his favorite weapon in battle as well.? Naruto?s heart rate increased as he unwrapped the package to see two black fingerless gloves with two pieces of different coloured metal plates bonded to the two gloves respectively, ?this?? Jiraiya said as he held the two gloves in front of naruto ? are nova and shadow, nova being the glove with the metal plate that was white in colour with black charka markings and shadow being the glove with the black metal plate with charka markings, they were made by your father.?
Naruto after wearing the gloves looked at them and smiled with tears in his eyes:
? My f-f-ather?s? he managed to croaked out before breaking in tears, Jiraiya bended down to console him, embracing naruto into a hug ? hey now what are you crying for?
You should be happy you have inherited your father?s weapon.? Naruto look
up to see Jiraiya sporting a goofy grin, ?thanks ero- sennin? he said, Jiraiya smiled and stood up ?come on lets get out of here, we still have the staff to free.
The next day ~ (after freeing the staff of the inn and getting the business back to normal)
?Hey ero-sennin, what does this gloves do?? Naruto asked as they traveled to the forest, ?and why the sudden training??.
?Well you see all the moves that I taught you to use with hellstorm, you wouldn?t be able to use with nova and shadow, nova and shadows are not the name of the gloves, they are the names of the metal plates on the gloves.? Jiraiya explained.
?Huh? , what is so special about the plates?? Naruto wondered as they stop walking, ?try charging them with your charka Jiraiya said. Naruto charged his charka through them and was shocked to see the plates on the gloves extend to form sharp elegant looking blades. Jiraiya continued, ? normally the two swords are in plate form for easy transportation, however they will extend once they are charged with charka, but it cant be anyone?s charka it must be a Uzumaki?s charka. Nova and shadow has many different technique unique to each blade for example Nova has powerful light elemental defensive moves, while Shadow has powerful offensive dark elemental offensive moves.? ?you would also have to learn a new swordplay the dual blades swordplay if you want to use the two blades efficiently.?
?What! Mastering the new moves and learning the a new swordplay in two months are impossible.? Naruto shouted as he hear what Jiraiya had in mind, ?Nonsense your father mastered everything in one month, are you telling me your weak?? Naruto glared at the sennin, ?lets get started,? he said in a dark tone ?I will proved you wrong.? ?Good, then we shall start training straight away? Jiraiya said with that he disappeared in a puff and reappeared behind Naruto and pressed them into Naruto?s back ?disabling noo jutsu!? suddenly Naruto?s fist clenched tightly and no matter how hard he tried he could not open them. ?What the hell!? naruto cursed as Jiraiya started attacking ?use your blades Naruto!? Jiraiya shouted in between strikes. ? I see that you have your father?s blades they were formidable when I faced them in battle they might prove to be useful.? Kyuubi added. Naruto was a bit surprised, after the merging of their charka the fox only spoke to him when he was in trouble had advice or moves to teach him.? ?well lets hope I make it back in time for the chuunin exam, man I still cant believe Jiraiya was able to sneak up on me with that jutsu I must train more!!!? Naruto begin fighting back with the pair of blades, ?argh I will master everything in the two months for this is only another obstacle in my road to become hokage!!? Naruto shouted, Jiraiya smiled when he heard that, ?c?mon show me what you are made of !!!? and with that was the start of two months of vigorous training in which was only to stop when it was time to sleep or eat.
Little did Naruto knew that Jiraiya made up the lie of his father mastering everything in one month, in actual fact it took yondaime nearly a year to master everything.
Location: Tokyo, Japan, star buck?s coffeehouse
Hinata sighed it has been four years since she had last seen her beloved Naruto kun, just the thought of his blond hair, his clear blue eyes made her wish that she was with him wherever he was. Sakura stopped talking about her day at the organization as she saw Hinata spacing out with a blank look in her eyes. Sakura was sure Hinata was thinking of Naruto, although she didn?t know Naruto that well he seems to be quite a nice guy even though the last time she saw him was around four years back. Sakura suddenly thought of a very evil joke, ?Hinata!? she suddenly shouted bringing hinata crashing back down to reality, ?I thought I saw Naruto walking by there!? she told Hinata while trying to hid her devilish grin, ?what?? and before even considering what Sakura told her to be a lie she used her shinobi training to reach the exit in two seconds flat and bolted out the door.
Sakura was shocked; she never thought that hinata would fall for her trick. As she sat in her seat recalling how Hinata had grown out of her shell to become a confident ninja while Naruto was absent.
*Half an hour later
Hinata came back in the coffeehouse, her face as red as an apple, Sakura didn?t know if she was so red because of embarrassment or because she was flushed from running. She tried to keep a neutral face and prevent herself from rolling all over the floor laughing as Hinata sat down across her. Hinata shot her an embarrassed look mixed with a death glare : ?Sakura that was not very funny making me run down the street like a madwoman? at that moment sakura lost it and started laughing uncontrollably ?ha ha ha Hinata I apologize I thought you were in love with him but I was wrong you are madly obsess with that boy? she said still giggling. Hinata if possible blushed an even darker shade of red.
?Hey Hinata what do you think about the upcoming chuninn exam?? Sakura asked changing the subject, ?well even though we are 17 years old we are taking the exam for the first time, so I am actually quite nervous.?, Hinata replied while slowly sipping her coffee.
?So what about this mysterious teammate of yours in team 7, has he arrived yet?? Hinata asked.
?Nope not yet? sakura said, normally genin were splitted into teas of three but sakura?s team, team 7 was a bit different it only consist of Haruno Sakura and Uchiha Sasuke with a third member to join them later in the chuunin exams. Not that Sakura mind after all she get to spend more time with her beloved sasuke kun.
*two months later
Jiraiya?s eyes widen as Naruto charged him with Nova and Shadow extended, twisting in mid air to avoid the charge as well as to start a combo, Jiraiya thought he had Naruto in a corner when he heard: ?Nova defensive technique!! Blinding wave? Jiraiya was immediately struck by a white blinding shock wave, which not only blinded him but knocked him off his feet as well ?oh crap? Jiraiya thought as he felt a blade being pressed against his throat. ?Game over looks like I win, lunch will be on you? with that the blade was withdrawn. When Jiraiya regained his sight he saw Naruto packing up their equipment, ?Huh?? where are we going?? he asked. Naruto turned around with a shocked look on his face ? we have to go back to the hidden leaf to take the chuunin exam you idiot! How can you forget about such an important matter?.? Naruto shouted as they made their way to the airport, Jiraiya dressed in a black business suit with a black shirt instead of the usual white, while Naruto was wearing a grey sleeveless jacket and a black t-shirt underneath with grey cargo pants.
As they checked in the airport Jiraiya recalled how the training went, frankly he was shocked at how fast Naruto had gotten the basics of dual swordplay and the offensive and defensive moves that nova and shadow had. In the short amount of two months Naruto was able to use to use the two blade effectively in battle and had completely mastered nova?s defensive moves, the only thing left was to master completely shadow?s offensive attacks.
?Lets get going? Naruto said happily. ?it?s time to go back and rock the hidden leaf.? He added and with that the pair boarded the plane back to Japan.
From author: Whew that was life draining !!*spits blood, but I had fun writing this anyways this is still my first fanfic so advice and comments would be greatly appreciated.
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