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Within Immortal Reach (poem)

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 9:30 pm
by Mellie
Within Immortal Reach
By: Mellie
Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing and make no profit from this.



I walk each day
Quiet, undisturbed.
No one
no one
notices.

Until I see her.

Yes, it is her.
I can see her,
breathe her,
feel her.

But she goes.

Will she come-
return to me?
"Of course,"
They say.

But do they know?
Do they really know?
How can one
understand
The complexity
Of her soul?

I cannot.
I will repeat:
I cannot.

She walks forever
With or without me.
She is strong
Going to immortality.

She left last night,
To go to places...unseen.
I will follow,
sooner or later.
I think this will help.

But the blood.
The blood I made bleed.
Will it fade?
Let me go to her?

I hope so.
Damnation hurts.
I've felt it before.
Before her.

Yes, I know.
I cannot be certain.
But just beyond those clouds.
I see her cotton dress.

It is her.

But the ground.
It rushes to meet me.
How hard and cruel.
To separate lovers.

That
That is what we were.
Tender and sweet.
I loved her.
And I can only hope
She loved me.
That
That will be
the only thing
that makes this
worth it.

The pain
The struggle
The tears.
But no matter.
I will get to her.
I promise.

~Fin

Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 12:06 pm
by angel222
*deep sigh of hapiness* *_* I don't have any words for it i just LOVE IT
I see her cotton dress.

It is her.

But the ground.
It rushes to meet me.
How hard and cruel.
To separate lovers.
:cry: :cry: Yep, I totally love it

Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 12:56 pm
by Lady Casper
Wow Mel

I loved it!
:wink:

Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 1:01 pm
by Raspberry
:eek: :eek: :eek:

*can't close her mouth from awe*

AMAZING! :D

Great job! :D

Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2004 3:52 pm
by Mellie
I'm glad you all enjoyed it! Your words make me all gooey and happy inside *hugs everyone* thanks for reviewing!