Tasting Amber Final Chapter

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Tasting Amber Final Chapter

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DISCLAIMER: I don't own Inuyasha et al, and I seriously doubt that the author would want to sell them to me for my old kindergarden stamp collection.

WARNING: This is the most graphic and final installment of this series, and is for mature readers only :eek: :eek: :eek: . Don't say I didn't warn you...

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Sitting up to gather leverage, sinewy demonic muscles pulled back before forging forward into the trembling woman in a single brutal thrust.

AHHHhhhhhhh!!!!

Agony.

Humiliation.

Depravity.

And pleasure?

The most intense pleasure she had ever known.

They all swirled and fused in a red-blurred haze in her mind. Kagome didn?t know where one ended and the other began, nor did she care. No sounds came out of her?her mouth was in a perfect little ?O,? and, she realized later, she had stopped breathing. All she could feel was her body jumping at the demon?s flex, her teeth chattering with each plunge, and her cervix groaning under the assault.

Each thrust was precision aimed and well-defined, designed to reverberate through her body and pound her senses. She felt each vein on his member as her recesses tightened on the intruder, milking him for sweet release. Kagome couldn?t move if she wanted to, pinned to the ground and shaking from unearthly ecstasy. Inuyasha was grunting and snarling with exertion, his moves lifting her hindquarters off the ground completely, limbs popping from the strain as he rode her harder and faster.

Slap, slap, slap, slap, slap?

Her physical assault was joined by a verbal one as her juices reverberated with the impact of Inuyasha?s full desire again and again. The world was moving topsy-turvy and all that it consisted of was the earth on her face and a red-eyed dog demon ravishing her body and marking her soul. Her ebony hair pooled around her face, and then, as if forgetting the most obvious, her tormentor grabbed a fistful, pulled her face back, and leaned in close.

You?re mine, bitch. And don?t you ever forget it.

Normally this would have elicited an immediate activation of the prayer beads that circled the dog-demon?s throat, and from sheer pride Kagome snapped back to attention long enough to consider using it except?except she had removed them the night before after mating with her sweet hanyou as a sign of trust between them. That and?

?and she was kind of enjoying herself.

Though Kagome would never admit it to anyone aloud, much less her egotistical hanyou, sometimes she liked being submissive. There was less to do, less to worry about. Now, she had learned to fend for herself and pull her own weight, but sometimes when no one was looking or even paying attention to her behavior, she was perfectly happy taking orders and making other people happy?and sex was no different. She was enjoying the feeling of losing control, of biting and swearing, and growling in her own right?of reveling in the decadence of rutting with her mate, and of knowing that only she could face him in his demonic state and walk away alive?or so she hoped.

Inuyasha, sensing that Kagome was subconsciously wandering, snarled and lifted her left leg off of the ground, completely twirling her 180 degrees on his member like a roast on a spit, caught her in midair and doubled her over, pinning her feet next to her ears before thrusting into her again. Sharp and searing pleasure/pain on the left of her, then the right of her?Kagome felt her belly-button pop up like a cheap floatation toy in a tub of water.

Ooooooooo?

Her nipples made stiff triangles that he bit and twisted mercilessly, demonic growls mixing with her human cries of lust and pain. There was no time, no space, just the need, the fire, and the slap, slap, slap of her demon lover. Orgasm couldn?t describe what she was feeling?she was so overwhelmed that she was physically numb from stimulation. Inuyasha?s claws scratched across her thighs and breasts, leaving elongated scratches and red welts behind. Supernaturally long fangs pierced the vulnerable skin around her neck leaving a permanent mark?his mark?in plain sight to the entire world. His entire growling, snarling, grunting body had its way while never disconnecting from the intense fire connecting them at the loins.

The youkai was fucking the living daylights out of her properly?and truly enjoying himself.

And so was Kagome.

Please. Don?t. Stop?

In full demon form, Inuyasha?s stamina was insane. Day turned into night as Kagome watched her feet bounce off of his hulking shoulders, his chest, the tree, the earth. Every position, every naughty sinful desire was explored, dissected, and completely nailed under the Goshinbu tree. She had splinters in her ribs and grass and soil matted in her hair and teeth; dirt was embedded under nails that had broken from ripping earth. But finally, gods be thanked?finally!, Kagome could feel his muscles tense for release. Hers had long since become mush and, unable to orgasm for a ninth time, she simply prepared for one final mind-searing thrust, a blinding pain that threatened to tear her apart before melting into residual waves of ungodly pleasure.

Finally, a whimper from her mate?

?inu...yasha?? she asked in a small whisper, ready to pass out once knowing her dog-boy was finally back from whatever nether regions he had slumbered in. The pain in her body was excruciating?she was covered head to toe in scratches and possessive bitemarks, and her muscles had been pushed beyond their limit in the acrobatic poses that she had endured all day. It would take days to weeks for her intimate areas to heal.

?kagome?? came the familiar voice still sleep-drugged and uncertain. Wafting from him was the scent of acorns and sage.

Thank the gods.

She was exhausted, barely breathing on her stomach and utterly sated from the marathon session with the inuyoukai, but she had survived the claiming by a full-on demon. And given her lover a release from restraint?a one-time deal.

So why was she nervous?

Kagome stiffened. The rumbling behind her was low and ominous. She felt him sniffing her, licking her again?but in a different place. Acorns and sage, my ass. Oh, gods no?NOT THERE!

A still demon-possessed Inuyasha, red eyes glowing in the full moonlight, growled with delight.

Oi bitch, round two?
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So OK. I did't really have anything in mind when I began this story, except exploring the taboo and, with all their angst and things-better-left-unspoken dynamic, Inyuasha and Kagome happened to serve as the innocent victims churned mercilessly in my incredibly sick and perverted mind. Now that I've utterly destroyed any warm and fuzzies in the most graphic way possible, I'd love your feedback. New fanfic with an actual plot to follow soon!

Inuyasha: Kagome? Would you actually want me to do those things to you?

Kagome: Ew, NO! How could you even think that, Inuyasha?!!

Inuyasha: Well, geez it was a simple question! YOU DON'T HAVE TO YELL IT YOU KNOW!!!

Kagome: Inuyashaaa...

Inuyasha: Kagome, N-

Kagome: Sit, boy! SIT! SITSITSITSITSIT!

Inuyasha [dazed and confused]: it was only a question...

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Post by Lara Winner »

Well at least Kagome's gonna die with a smile on her face which is more than I can say for the rest of us. :salute: Loved the smut! Short sweet and directly to the point. That's the way a true pwp lemon should be.

Kudos! :D :D :D
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Post by Lady Casper »

Wow That was seriously intresting with a lot of angst on the side :wink:

I liked it a lot!
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Post by Little Green Miko »

hmm....<< >>....it was interesting in a way...but not as graphic as you said it would be. No offense meant at all-but I've read raunchier stuff, with more zing to it. lol. It was a good start though. ^^

And my mom wants to make the comment that she hopes Inu was kidding about the anal comment-because tissues are rather thinner back there and he could rip her and kill her....: x
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Post by rich onyx »

True, I could have made it alot more graphic, but I decided to err on the side of caution (my first fanfic and my first lemon). There is a fourth chapter, but I'm not posting that one :oops: . At least I know for the future--sorry to dissapoint!

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Way the go, IY!!!!! *thumbs up* And KAGOME, u go girl!!!!!!!!!!!!! *double thumbs up* Pure lemon. *raises glass in a toast* Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Wingnut »

If I were Kagome I would leave ASAP and never return to that kind of relationship. She will ultimately be hurt and dissapointed by it all.
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Post by luved_by_bishie_duelistch »

O_o yes... lots of pain, lil bit of angst.... beautiful. sequel soon? ya can't leve me hanging! me want more lemon! sorry. got a bit over hyper. i loved it. pleaseopleasepleaseplease write a sequel? luv dc
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