No title. Poem

[Ally]

Out the window
On the roof
The same tin cup
of hate,
poors over...
boiling.
Into thin air.
A word lost to the wind
a sign never heard in the breeze,
I shouldn't of
but did.
And now your gone.
I never was the one
to let myself go.

I'm sorry Dave.

[Perfect Soldier]

I see, that was interesting timing then. I'm sorry for your loss, great poem.

Zero

[Mellie]

wow. Very emotional.

[Eienvine]

That was really well written. I liked the structure and flow of it, particularly. And the content, obviously. Sad, but thought-provoking. Way to go.

[Ally]

Thank you.

[CultureShock87]

THat was excellent, i can't really say exactly what i loved about it. it was just so good.