Turnabout (poem)

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Mellie
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Turnabout (poem)

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Those years ago
I remember now
The pain endured
So quietly
I didn't speak
Too afraid
But now I scream
At my weakness.

I used to be unhappy
No friends to hand around
I cried myself to sleep
Until I found
Escape.

The words I use
Come from the heart
A part of me
That now is strong.

What they did was wrong
But they didn't care
Just as long
As I wasn't there.

Everything changes
And one day it did for me.
No longer angry
Just a little crazy.
They didn't know
How I escaped,
But it helped me live
And keep moving on.

What I suffered
Helped me find hope
When I couldn't
Stand it,
It helped me cope:
Poems and stories
Drawn from deep

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Post by Chibi-sitter »

The words I use
Come from the heart
A part of me
That now is strong.
It helped me cope:
Poems and stories
Drawn from deep
Congrats Mellie :salute: Once again you managed to amaze me.
You keep getting better and better :D

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Re: Turnabout (poem)

Post by HeerosChick1842 »

Mellie wrote: I cried myself to sleep
I find myself doing this lately... enough bout me now about this poem, I thought it was great. :salute: Keep up the good work!
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Post by Perfect Soldier »

A lot of those versus can really refrence to other peoples' lives. I think people can easily relate and that really touches me. It was very good, Mellie.

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I'm not afraid of tomorrow,
i'm only scared of myself,
feels like my insides are on fire
and i'm looking through
the eyes of someone else

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Post by Mellie »

once again, thank you for all your reviews. they mean a lot. And hopefully whatever hard things you are going through now will one day disappear, I know they did for me.

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