GW Challenge #33 - "Distractions" (3xR)

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GW Challenge #33 - "Distractions" (3xR)

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The plotbunnies wouldn't leave me alone with this prompt, but they avoided me just enough to give me ideas, then turn tail and run. So it took me all week to figure out what to write.

They also insisted that this be a 3xR, which is a first for me--I've never tried it before. It was...interesting.

I don't know if you would call this limey or not. I suppose it is, a little bit. Is there a level lower than lime? Maybe it's an orange. ^^

Distractions
by Sara
Word Count: 502 (it's just a little bit over--is that OK? ^^)
Standard Disclaimer: It wasn't me! I was dead at the time! I was on the moon! With Steve!

~

Soft lips, brushing the curve of her ear, ghosting down to caress her neck. A tickling of breath, which whispered along her skin, stirring the fine, downy hairs on her neck. Then--a pause, and the same treatment, only on the other ear. It was very...very...

"Distracting," she huffed, though it was an exhale of guilty pleasure, rather than annoyance.

"You work too hard." His voice, a mere murmur, brushed past her ear with the ghost of a chuckle. "I figured a distraction would be welcomed."

"I'm not complaining." Her lips, soft as rose petals, quirked up in the smallest of smiles. "It's just that I don't have the luxury of being distracted right now."

"Of course you do." His hands slid down to cradle her arms, and he rested his chin on one shoulder. She could just see the fringe of tawny brown hair through her peripheral vision. "Life gives us many choices, after all. You have the option of being distracted."

"Of course I have the option." She cocked her head, which caused her honey-colored tresses to murmur against his cheek. "That doesn't mean I can afford to be distracted, however. Just because the option is there, doesn't mean that I can take it." She placed her hands flat on the desk, trying to ignore the way he nuzzled her neck with his nose, or the soft, buzzing sensation that rustled along her skin and made her feel like purring....

"There will be other days for work," he said simply.

She huffed, though there was not much force behind it. "I never do this when you're trying to work."

His hands, slightly calloused and warm, trailed their way down her arms, smoothing across the backs of her hands. "I never said you couldn't, either."

Her lips pursed, not quite a scowl, not quite a smirk...but before she could speak, his hands moved, lightning-quick, slipping under hers to deftly grasp the papers hidden there, flipping them into the air like so much giant confetti. The papers scattered haphazardly, draping themselves over chairs, scuttling under her desk.

"Trowa--! You--why did you--now I--argh! Do you know how long it took me to get those papers in order?! It will take me hours to try and put them back together!"

She moved to stand up, to regain her lost work, but before she could move, strong arms encircled her from behind. She gasped at the feel of his chest, warm and solid, pressed against her back, and was struck by the realization that she did not want to move, not one bit.

"How sad," he breathed, in a manner that caused her knees to liquefy, "that I have to provide a distraction for my distraction."

She did purr this time, and gained just enough leverage to swivel so she faced him, realizing suddenly that concentrating on her work was the very last thing on her mind.

After all, she thought, a little distraction never hurt anybody, right?

~Fin~

Ah, the things we write when we're pressed for time... :P
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Post by wicked »

A level below lime? Pineapple? Grapefruit? Now I must ponder. :-?

I love it Sara. It makes me love my 3xR fetish all the more. ^___^ I seriously wouldn't be putting up a fight with Trowa distracting me. *le sigh* And don't worry about going over the word limit. My entry for the "morning after" challenge was 900+ words. No one scolded me. At least I don't think they did.

Now when you say writing 3xR for the first time was interesting do you mean interesting as in, "Hm maybe I'll write more 3xR because it's such a wonderfully tempting pairing" or as in "Dear God if Rose sees this I'm going to the next SINNER!"?

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Post by Beck »

Oh my! I'm getting a case of the vapors *fans self* But YAY!!! More het!!! And yeah, the word count doesn't really matter, some have even written more words than what my No Regrets fic was. Will post this right away :bounce:

Glad someone had an idea for this. I had one running in my head but I couldn't grasp it all in order to make it into a ficlet. *sigh*
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Post by lilac310 »

Awww...why do 3xR fics have to be so damn sultry and enticing?....With Trowa having all the smooth, sexy moves....Oh my! He's HOT!!!!...I really like this one....I hope there'll be more!!!

Just something that crossed my mind a LONG time ago (but had neither the guts nor the time to say it) and I thought that maybe I should voice it out now...Haven't anyone noticed a pattern when it comes to writing fics involving the Gundam pilots (specifically, Heero, Duo, and Trowa)?

(most of you probably noticed this even before I did :wink: ..lol)

Heero's always rough around the edges..has that stoic attitude and unruly appearance...sort of like a lion that would pounce on you, catching you off guard...

Whereas Duo has that happy-go-lucky aura around him....full of funny antics and whatnot....smiles and grins a lot....

And Trowa has that smooth, sexy moves...cat-like...always neat (esp. the hair!)..has that graceful elegance on him...

blah blah blah..there's more but I don't want to babble WAY too much!!!...

peace! :-P
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Post by Mellie »

I agree with you lilac! But nonetheless, I like it all. Sexy Trowa makes me melt! *_*

Anyway, loved the fic, Sara. Very well done. Makes me want a distraction, or cause one, myself. Now if only I could stay distracted on mondays, tuesdays, wednesdays, fridays, and saturdays...

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Post by Tobo Castit »

I want Trowa to distract me too... Anyway, this was adorable! I love it!
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wicked wrote:A level below lime? Pineapple? Grapefruit? Now I must ponder. :-?

I love it Sara. It makes me love my 3xR fetish all the more. ^___^ I seriously wouldn't be putting up a fight with Trowa distracting me. *le sigh* And don't worry about going over the word limit. My entry for the "morning after" challenge was 900+ words. No one scolded me. At least I don't think they did.

Now when you say writing 3xR for the first time was interesting do you mean interesting as in, "Hm maybe I'll write more 3xR because it's such a wonderfully tempting pairing" or as in "Dear God if Rose sees this I'm going to the next SINNER!"?

~Wicked
*grins* You'd think Relena would know better than to put up a fight at a distraction like that, herself. That must've been some project she was working on. ^_~

It was interesting because I'd never tried it before. The dynamics were all different. Not 'interesting' in a bad way; just...interesting. ^^ And I'm not worried about Rose making me the next "sinner". She knows better than to try, because if she did, and if she tried to make me do penance, I'd just say, "Oh well" and go on my merry way. I'm a 1xR religious heretic. XD

I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I didn't realize that 3xR was a favorite of yours, but I'm glad I wrote it, now. I was afraid that no one would like it. ^^;;
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Post by Goldilocks »

Beck wrote:Oh my! I'm getting a case of the vapors *fans self* But YAY!!! More het!!! And yeah, the word count doesn't really matter, some have even written more words than what my No Regrets fic was. Will post this right away :bounce:

Glad someone had an idea for this. I had one running in my head but I couldn't grasp it all in order to make it into a ficlet. *sigh*
The idea seriously would not let me go. I was thinking on it all week, and I had an idea just lurking outside my creativity, evading capture. But I finally pinned it down and wrote something. *grins*

This is kind of embarrassing, but...I didn't realize that this was going to an LJ community. ^^;;;;;; I thought this was a BI-only prompt. I'm actually surprised I didn't get flamed by all the yaoi fans for daring to tread on their precious, precious yaoi list with my het fic. -_- Yet another reason why I'm avoiding the majority of the fandom.

But anyway, thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. ^^
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Post by Goldilocks »

lilac310 wrote:Awww...why do 3xR fics have to be so damn sultry and enticing?....With Trowa having all the smooth, sexy moves....Oh my! He's HOT!!!!...I really like this one....I hope there'll be more!!!
*grins* He is hot, isn't he? It's always the quiet ones you've gotta watch. ^_~ I don't know if there will be more like this or not; this was just a one-time 'see if I can do this' sort of thing. But you never know! We'll have to wait and see.
lilac310 wrote:Just something that crossed my mind a LONG time ago (but had neither the guts nor the time to say it) and I thought that maybe I should voice it out now...Haven't anyone noticed a pattern when it comes to writing fics involving the Gundam pilots (specifically, Heero, Duo, and Trowa)?

(most of you probably noticed this even before I did :wink: ..lol)

Heero's always rough around the edges..has that stoic attitude and unruly appearance...sort of like a lion that would pounce on you, catching you off guard...

Whereas Duo has that happy-go-lucky aura around him....full of funny antics and whatnot....smiles and grins a lot....

And Trowa has that smooth, sexy moves...cat-like...always neat (esp. the hair!)..has that graceful elegance on him...

blah blah blah..there's more but I don't want to babble WAY too much!!!...

peace! :-P
I've noticed that, too. I'm not sure if it's stereotypes about their personalities, or just the way people think they'd act when in a relationship. Or maybe other writers go after what they've read of other authors. It's a good question, and one I've noticed, myself.

One thing that might explain why they tend to act the same in so many stories is that a lot of people expect to see the characters acting in a certain way. I'm not saying that making them severely OOC is okay, but it sometimes seems like you can't even deviate a little bit without risking attack, because of fandom beliefs. If you write an interpretation that is too out there, people stand up and take notice for the wrong reasons. Bleh.

But yeah, it is an interesting observation, and one I've made before, too.

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the ficlet! I'm not sure if there's more where that came from, but we'll have to wait and see. ^^
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Post by Goldilocks »

Mellie wrote:I agree with you lilac! But nonetheless, I like it all. Sexy Trowa makes me melt! *_*

Anyway, loved the fic, Sara. Very well done. Makes me want a distraction, or cause one, myself. Now if only I could stay distracted on mondays, tuesdays, wednesdays, fridays, and saturdays...
*grins* Sexy Trowa makes me melt, too. That's probably why the muses kept insisting that that's the pairing I should write. ;) And I know I wouldn't pooh-pooh a distraction like that, either! Makes me wonder what Relena was thinking. XD *grins* As for distractions...I'm not sure how to help you there. ^^;;; Thanks for reading! ^_^
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