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Post by Morrighan »

:eek: This just came out of nowhere, so I don't even know if it's any good.

Enjoy!


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Do you realize my heart is in your hands now?
With one word, the shields come crashing down
The tears will start to fall
Tell my why
I had to fall in love with you

You probably don?t have the answers
And neither do I

My heart is in your hands

What are you going to do about it?
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Post by Chibi-sitter »

What are you going to do about it?
Awww I like that line :D

Short, but the meaning is clear. :salute:
My heart is in your hands
That line appears twice in your poem, could that be a title?

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Post by HeerosChick1842 »

*gasp* a poem that actually describes how i feel... me like :salute:
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Post by Eienvine »

I liked it! Very succinct, and I know the feeling you're portraying- you show it very well!
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Post by Mellie »

concise and powerful, good job!
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