Fan Fic for everybody

[SOULS_LEADER]

A real Fan Fic

Ok guys and gals im going to write a fan fic , but heres the catch i want other fans to pitch ideas for me to put in the story
ex
names ( i need about 20 new character names and code names)
skills
Some of Souskes past
Kanames parents
Old and new SRT members
New enemies
new love triangles (yey)

I am doing this to make a fan fic that would entertain everybody
and oh yeah i already wrote the first episode Ill post it by tonight or latest tommorow.



Heres a over all in the series
Old friends, New whispered, Fucked up soldiers, Assasins, Druged children, IM IN MEDICATION (youll see), New lovers, Family, new friends and classmates, New weapons and AS ( I hope), Least likely to be someone, Old japan (ok i must stop smoking the hash). A lot of blood, New girls, Conflict, Enemies, A chick that has a crush on Kaname (yey). Someone has a love scene with weber (i wonder who). Someone gets married



this is based after FMP. Sry could have made it better if i watch FMP?

[TimeShifter16]

First off, what?! Be more specific on what you want! One or two words doesn't cut it. I know "New whispered" refers to more people like Kaname and Tessa, but what is "old japan" or "Least likely to be someone"? Explain! Also, are you saying you've never seen FMP? If so, you should before you write a fan fic.

[SOULS_LEADER]

I never saw fummufu . I did see the first season of fmp (i even have it in dvd). Im asking cause i wanted to get names for example. I didnot want pick out stupid names out of my head. cause if i had a chance i would name one of the characters dog (i dont know why but i will). Old japan is a time of the samurai. and oh yeah youll figure out what i mean by least likely to be someone.

[SOULS_LEADER]

and ohh yeah i must get of the hash lol

[dd]

suggestions:

Read 'End of day by Day' at Boku-tachi.net

Use Google. Type in various things (like girsl + name + japan, or warrior + Japna, etc) to get name ideas. Or if you want to be sly, use combiantions of names from voice actors.

Search for Full Metal Panic + Kaname + birthday or hgeight or father, etc, to pull up a site that gives her history.

Start by making up your own past for things that don't have gospel. then base the happenings on how such a person would act.

Take suggestions, but it has to come from your head. Only you (hopefully) will be motivbated to keep things going through thick and thin.

If you have fun with the story, other people probably will too...

[SOULS_LEADER]

I tried reading it but i rembered I CANT FUCKIN READ (that long) lol.

[SOULS_LEADER]

Ohh yeah i take back what i said before ive seen some of Fummuffu

[SOULS_LEADER]

Full metal panic
"steel hearts"

New life

It starts by seeing a long haired boy in uniform chasing something. He was after a man in mithril uniform. he caught up to him and pulled out a silver revolver with beuatiful engravings the man shouted you fuckers dont die and pointed his sniper rifle at him and the view looks up to the sky and hears a shot .
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It jumps Into jendai high school were you see kaname and souske arguing. everybody was staring at them. Shinji said there they go again fighting for no apperent reason. They were stoped by tessa when she said the teacher coming. everybody sat down. The teacher said good morning class. I have to take roll call so sound off ok.

the seen jumps to a guy who was running from the street to the school and into the halls. He was wearing a black button down shirt and kahki pants. he was rushing into class. he triped on the door railing in his way in. He said " ouch. ". everybody was laughing exept for souske who kept a straight face. Kaname was wodering who the hell is this guy. He stood up and gave the teacher a piece of paper . The teacher turned to the class and said" seems like we have a new addition to the class david why wont you present youre self to the class." He replied ok. He said "Hello everybody my name is david miamoto but you can call me david. I am 16 years old and i came from the US to study here." Kaname thought this guy looks familiar meh maybe its nothing. so the teacher asked him why arent you in uniform. he looked at himself and laughed. He said sorry I didnt have the time to buy one. the teacher said ok just be sure to buy it this week. You can sit down any where you like. He sat down right next to shinji and souske.
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The bell rang and it was lunch time. Mizuki said do you think he's seeing someone. Who said Kaname. Mizuki replied the new guy david. Why wont you go ask said kyouko. tessa called kaname and can i speak to you privately.I am sorry for telling you this but seems like there putting new people in to guard you there might be a chance that souske would be replaced. kaname said replaced. yeah they said theyre sending 3 new people in and I have to leave by next month. Kaname exclaimed cant you do anything. She replied im sorry i tried but it was direct orders from the top. Souske came out and said anything wrong. they both replied nothing. When kaname walked in he was staring at her. she saw it and he suddenly turned and looked out as if he wasnt staring. kaname said queitly that guy is creeping me out. Kyouko came up to her and asked her and tessa if they wanted to go to the mall. she said yeah sure. souske heared her and came up to her and said your going to the mall? Hmm, said kaname she said yeah. you want to go with us she said. Mizuki interupted uuh uh no way where going to bring him along. Besides i dont want him to do what he did last time on our "fake date" remeber. Souske looked down. He said its alright If you guys dont want me there. He said i can still do my job with out being seen. They all said what?! he turned red and said nothing nothing. Mizuki said that guy gets weirder and wierder everyday what a loser. Kaname and Tessa suddenly looked at her like they where about to kill her. She said what i say




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Later They were walking in the mall. kaname said wow I cant belive souske's not following us. Tessa said I feel woried. about what kyouko said. Well we might get in to trouble for one. Mizuki exclaimed dont worry theres 4 of us what could possibly happen. They noticed the cup mascot infront of a restaurant. it was souske. mizuki said what a loser and they all laughed. They didnt know that souske was inside. He is worried that his mobility is limited. So he took of the suit in the alley cautiously followed them. they turned the corner and souske followed. Then they went in a store. Souske stoped and stared. Its a lingre store he couldnt get in because he would be branded as a pervert. So he went to the other side of the street and waited there. Exactly when a robber stole a ladies purse. Being souske a hero he went after the guy. While souske was chasing after the crook. They all went down a small empty street. Mizuki said Its a short cut. Kyouko and tessa was uneasy. Then someone shouted "hey baby". They looked up and saw a ugly looking guy on a makeshift chair. He said hey baby wanna have some fun. Kaname was pissed. She said you better shut the hell up before i kick your ass. The guy said. mmmm i like them frisky. then almost 8 guys came out with chains, bats, and knives. The guy said the blue haired one is mine. they all replied yes boss. and they just jumped on everybody. Tessa screams and souske hears it. He was out of breath because he had to run back and forth to get the purse back to the owner. So he starts running. Kaname was puting up a fight until she was pinned down. tessa and the others were being held and harrased. The boss went up to kaname and said " kick my ass?" and put his hand in her skirt.



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UHHHHHHHHH what the fuck am i writting (Sry for my language im doing this at 3 in the morning and high on cafine lol)
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Before he could reach anything a suitcase and a plastic bag flew and hit the guy in the face. Kaname said souske. The girls notice a man. This guy was beating the hell out of the other members of the gang. Tessa said to her self those movements they look familiar. Then the boss stood back up and pulled out a knife. He attacked. He tried to counter it but got him in the arm. He said to himself damn it I cant do it anymore. So the guy was going for another shot. In defence he kicked the suit case and trip the boss. He stood up and kicked the guy in the face. He said that you should stop and go haras other guys that look like you. He helped tessa up and asked her are you ok. She said Im fine. Kyouko and mizuki woke up kaname and helped her up. Mizuki said hey wait a minute your the new guy. He laughed and said yeah Im the new guy.Kaname gave him along stare. David said uh what are you looking at(in a calm tone). Then Kaname said did you go to P.S 247 when you were younger. He replied yeah. Kaname exclaimed I knew it you looked kinda familiar we were in the same class together back in the states. he said How did you know ? She said that how goofy and unweildy you where and the facial expression you had everytime you where imbarrased. I use to make fun of you because of that. He said Yeah I knew it was you all along. Kaname said why didnt you say anything. He replied I was embarased to talk to you because i havent seen you in what 7 years . Then out of no where souske pops out with his glock and pointed it at david's head. David said easy there. David mumbled " damn, mithril always on the job". Souske said kaname are you alright.she said souske im alright put the gun down. david said put the 26 down im not the one who was hurting them. kaname stood up and tried walking. but she fell because her ankle was sprained durring the scuffle. Souske put it back the pistol in the holster and asked kaname you want me to carry you. She turned red and she was about to get mad but she saw Souske's face. She could tell that hes not doing this to cup a feel. He told Mizuki and Kyouko to gowith them. They said no way where going home. and they went off So he started walking. He asked kaname are you ok did they do anything to you. she said im fine. I should have let you come with us. He said its alright as long as you're safe.


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They were walking. Kaname was in souske's arms. Tessa was talking to David. She asked him you guys knew each other. He said yeah we did we were friends in back in the states. Tessa said were? If you were friends before your still friends. He laughed and said you sound just like your brot...... i mean my brother. He said that almost slipped. Souske said we're here. Tessa opened the door Souske put her in the couch. Then he looked at david like he was going to kill him. David had a blank stare with this glare of courage in his eyes. Kaname and Tessa suddenly had chills. Tessa fell down and souske was confused on what is happening. Tessa and kaname passed out. David turned around with his arm bleeding badly and left. a few minutes later The girls were Ok again. Souske asked what happened. Tessa said i dont know. It was overwhelming she said. It was like i could feel hate, anger,and sadness . Souske said are you alright kaname. She said i could see dead bodies it was horrible and both of them started crying.

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The next day. You see david running again to school. He said made it. He was panting hard. the ms Kagurazaka said sit down david. He smiled at kaname and tessa and said good morning guys. He said are you alright kaname. wow your ankle must have looks like you didnt get any sleep. She said i wasnt feeling thats it. he said i hope youll get better. Souske was in the back staring he thought to him self who the hell is this guy.


credits









dododododododo on the next full metal panic
threats of taking souske out was worrying the girls out. Souske is watching david like a hawk. and trouble was brewing in a small island in the south of japan.

ep Exposier see you soon

Yey i finnaly finnished

[SOULS_LEADER]

Im sorry if theres holes in the story if there is kindly tell me. also spelling errors

[SOULS_LEADER]

im still awake damn it

In my own opinion reading my own story its putting new twist. but the twist are repetative. but what the fuck do i know


pls forgive my language ty and good night