Edge of Forever
an angel without wings
can still find ways to fly
through darkness to the edge of forever
though the pathway is long
dark, cold and lonely,
the speck of light in the distance will bloom,
like a flower's petals
opening t'wards the sun;
destiny and will converge, become one
and all the choices made,
though they have seemed nothing,
will gather the scattered pieces of your heart.
...I'm not going to say anything. This is the first time I've posted any work of mine here and I don't want to make it any worse by making stupid comments. :x
(Poem) Edge of Forever
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(Poem) Edge of Forever
"Evil is a point of view. God kills indiscriminately and so shall we. For no creatures under God are as we are, none so like him as ourselves."
-Lestat, Interview with a Vampire
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Thats very nice 
And the rest of the poem of course 
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like Chibi said,
give yourself more credit, this is good workVery nice, Vampiric
Calla loved those lines and so do I. keep it up.destiny and vill converge, become one
and all the choices made,
though they have seemed nothing,
will gather the scattered pieces of your heart.
The pessimist sees the work ahead. The optimist sees the result. (unknown)