Natural Force [Rating R]

Mission briefing: KGB threatening code name WHISPERED candidates. Believed target: Kaname Chidori, 16, Tokyo, Japan.
Mission status: Critical<br>
Mission personnel: Sergeant Magjor Melissa Mao; Sgt. Kurz Weber, and Sgt. Sousuke Sagara, Arm-Slave specialist; Mission objective: To protect Kaname Chidori from KGB kidnapping plot, without alerting the Japanese gov't or target as to the identity of super-secret military organization, code-named MITHRIL. <br>
Kaname: Why are you following me?!
Sousuke: It's just coincidence.

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Natural Force [Rating R]

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Natural Force
By The Engrish Spy
Rating: R

Disclaimer: I don?t own Full Metal Panic.

A/N: First FMP story? Don?t read if you haven?t seen the end to FuMoFu. Do if you have. Engrish~


?Take off your clothes,? he ordered me very forcefully.

I was only slightly taken aback by his comment, but seeing that I would only be a few short minutes towards my death, it did not shock me at all. Of course my heart and mind had a different reaction.

As he continued to stare at me with his big brow eyes, always steeled into a hard look. Those eyes never showed emotion. I glanced elsewhere as my heart began to race at the thought that he would take me right here, in the School clinic. I felt my mouth open and the ramblings of a virgin on her wedding night.

He asked again, with more force then I ever thought he could ever use. His gaze seemed to intensify with the statement and once brown eyes were black, however there was an unknown emotion in them that I thought I would never see. It scared me but it could be justified in the end. Once again I began to ramble on, trying my best to avoid his gaze. I never notice that he had stepped closer to me. I never notice him tilt my chin up to meet his. I did notice the whispered soft touch that caressed my lips.

This time I was shocked. This was my first kiss of course. There were a thousand and one thoughts running through my head at the time. What was I supposed to do? Should I return the kiss? Where do my hands go? Why does it feel as if I can?t breathe?

He pulls back from me only slightly and then whispers it again, ?Take off your clothes.?

I gulped and then nodded slowly. He continued to stare at me like a hawk looking after its prey. I averted my eyes as I reached for the buttons of my coat and began to undo them one by one. He was still fully dressed in the ridiculous virus suit that he had put on in the class. His eyes were still watching me like a hawk. I frowned and then hid behind the curtain of the school clinic. Sagara followed me like always. I had my back turned as he closed the curtains.

In closing the curtains around the tiny cot, the light of the room began to take on another shape. It was almost foreign, almost a tangible warmth that could only be replicated in the womb. The sunlight that was streaming in from the main window, seemed dissipate through the yellow curtains making the light very mellow and almost sensual. I closed my eyes as I felt gloved hands reach to remove the undone uniform top.

The top was discarded and I felt the gloved hands push away my hair from my neck and warm lips touch my skin. I closed my eyes and let the warmth and delight that rippled in my skin to pass through me as he kissed up and down my neck and my now exposed shoulders.

?Take off the skirt now,? I heard him mumble.

I nodded and then brought my hands up to the zipper on the side. I shivered as the gloved hands caressed my arm that was in the process of undoing the zipper. Just as I had pulled the zipper down all the way, the two gloved hands that were caressing the arm, moved to my hips and push down the skirt till it pooled at my feet. He then moved me to the cot and began to remove my indoor slippers and socks. This left me only clad in my slip and undergarments.

I watched in fascination as he began to kiss my feet and then my legs, working his way up slowly. When he reached my knee, he stood up again. As I was sitting on the bed I had to look up to get a good look at his face. The expression was still one of a hawk but the hard lines had softened, as if undressing me really prepared him for what we were beginning to do.

He then began to capture my lips in a kiss. It was different from the first one. This one had more fervour, more vigour then what the other soft fluttery kiss had. I could feel his mouth part and his tong dart out to caress my lips. I had never really experienced these kind of feelings before that I gasped and his tong entered my mouth and it began to gently massage mine in slow strokes. I moved my hand to around his neck and he placed a knee on the bed to hold his weight as we continued to kiss. This continued on for a few good moments.

I was about to reach for the damn zipper on the virus suit when an annoying ringing interrupted us. I groaned as Sagara broke away from me.

?Don?t take it Sosuke-kun,? I whined as he moved beyond the curtain, shattering the womb like existence that he had created at the start. I was shocked and sat myself at the far end of the bed where I could close the curtains and poke my head through just in case someone did come in.

When I did poke my head through, I heard that what was supposed to be a biological weapon was in fact not one at all, and instead was an oil dissipater instead. I was livid with Sagara for doing but at the same time relieved. No longer was I, Chidori Kaname going to die. No longer did I have reason to believe that all my friends were going to die. No longer was Sagara Sosuke going to die as well. I took a sigh but outwardly appeared annoyed.

I watched as Sagara Sosuke shut the phone and turn towards my peeking head.

?I have to go. Don't forget me,? he said, his face and eyes softening as I looked at him with shock.

?Where are you going?? I asked him like a helpless woman.

Well truth be told I kind of was. I was still barely clothed and for whatever reason my uniform had deteriorated in to nothingness.

He only replied with a quick kiss to my lips and then bolted out the door. The next thing I heard was the roar of crowds as they charged down the hall. Each one shouting Sagara?s name in holy terror, with such fervour that the whole of Tokyo could hear what was going on at our little high school.

But I would never forget those words that he used. Four little words that at first seemed like it was as if he was going to rape me, but instead turned me into a pile of mush. Those words that seemed so distant right now. Four words I would never forget, ?Take off your clothes,?

The End?
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Post by ethereale »

nonononono no end!!!!!!! Keep going!!! Go go go!!! Haha good stuff! First time I've actually seen a sequel to the end of Fumoffu. As always I'm happy to offer my beta-reading services to you if you need it. Just don't stop!
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GO ON DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For a first timer this is awsome, now go on and make your reviewers happy, more damn you, more!

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Post by pilot03 »

Plenty of room to continue. I thought so when I say the episode. Hahahaha! That was just to funny...I got to go watch it again.
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

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Post by The Engrish Spy »

YOu know I'm not a first timer when it comes to Fan Fiction... I just said it was my first Full Metal Panic Story... :salute:
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Post by ethereale »

no way is mr. engrish a first timer....he is an elite GW fanifc writer who decided to dabble in some new fun.
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ethereale wrote:no way is mr. engrish a first timer....he is an elite GW fanifc writer who decided to dabble in some new fun.

I'M A GOD DAMN FEMALE YOU DOLT... IN NO WAY HAVE I BEEN, WILL EVER BE A GOD DAMN MALE!
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Post by pilot03 »

Dang....it was probably just a mistake....they were giving you a compliment to. :razz:
\\\"First you want to kill me, now you want to kiss me........blow.\\\" - Ash;Evil Dead

\\\"I''''m just living a dream I can''''t wake up from....\\\"
- Spike Spigel; Cowboy Bebop

*Ravisher in training* Club Beer

<s>Long Live for a reasonable time expectancy 3xR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! </s>

Thief of panties and hearts... 8)

<s>Part-time coffee boy..</s> :dunno:

Ph.d. of Pervertness :cheer:

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Post by The Engrish Spy »

:oops: sorry about that I hate being associated with males most of the time.
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Post by ethereale »

lol gomen gomen! I'm sorry that my gender disgusts you so much!
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