The Pain Within (Prologue)

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The Pain Within (Prologue)

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Allright, so I decided to create my own series. This is the prologue and would like to know if somebody is interested in reading this, so please review or I won't continue.

Disclaimer; If I owned Gundam Wing or the characters, you wouldn't be reading this but seeing it on TV!

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The Pain Within (Prologue) Relena's POV
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O God the pain. It rushes through every inch of my body. Why do they do this to me? Does it give them pleasure to see me, The Vice Foreign Minister, skwirm.

5 days, it has been 5 days. What do they want from me?

Lady Une warned me of a new group of terrorist trying to rid the world of it's peace. Why? Peace has been so good to mankind, it has been 6 years since Mariemea and not even a treat from terrorist who wished to kill me.
But they came, they came for me. It happened in a flash. I saw men, comming through my bedroom window. They came to take me. Heero didn't even have the time to get to my room.
I could hear him scream my name, so much pain.

I am not the only one.

I have seem others on my way to my cell, or the labratory.
There is no connection, women, men, young, old.
I can hear them screaming at night, and then suddenly the screams will stop with a loud bang.
They kill whoever screams.........
Our numbers are descreasing with every scream. All the children are already gone, they could not hold there screams, no control.

The pain subsides, finally. My treatment is done. I look in the doctors eyes. Something flashes through his eyes.
"Give her another injection." My eyes fly open. No! Not again!
"But...But sir! That's too dangerous, we don't know what will happen!" The boy has a point! Please god! No more treatments today!
A glare escapes the doctors eyes, and the boy flinches.
He dissapears from my eyesight. For a few seconds I notice myself praying that the boy lost his nurves and ran off. But footsteps alert me that he is already behind me.
I struggle againt my restaints, but they won't even move. I can't let them give me another injection!
I feel the needle enter my flesh. I can feel my body tremble with panic and fear. A few seconds later the pain starts again. A makes it's way down my face as reflexes start to tighten my muscles.

The doctor moves to his seat to look at the "preformance" I'm giving him.
I shut my mouth tight shut, they will not hear me scream. I will not give them the pleasure. I will never give him the pleasure!
The pain gets stronger, the only thing I can control now is my voice, my body struggles against the pain, all my muscles work hard and make my body move in all directions. As much as my restaints allow.
Suddenly a loud "click" gets my attention as I notice that the table I'm lying on has moved upwards and now hangs against the wall.
He wants to see me in pain, and he's actually smiling. Angre, rage and hate make my body struggle even more.

The pain continues for an hour, and I am trown back into my cell. I can not see anything in here. Darkness rules in these rooms. I even became quite fund of it. The only light I see is during the day when I'm on that table. There is no pain in the darkness, so I trive there. I am my proud self ones more, even though I am not a pacifist anymore. For a pacifist does not hate a man. And surely does not want to kill a sertain individual. I am no longer the Relena Peacecraft the whole world knows. I am now one of the victims of a mad scientist who constantly have to fight for their lives.

My ears suddenly tell me that military boots are comming. The cell next to me is openend. "Your next" a harsh manly voice calls.
"No, please no! Not again! I can't take it." A woman, probably around my age, maybe even younger. Anger ones again takes over as I rush towards the door and listen as the footsteps drift away.
Not long after that screaming is heard, and of course the shot didn't come much later.
"A shame, she had good potential."
My head snaps up at the strange voice, it sounded so familiar, but yet I couldn't place it.
"What do you mean?" I shock myself, I haven't used my voice in days, it sounded so alien.
"You haven't noticed do you? They kill the weaker ones, so they will keep the best."
What does this woman mean? "I don't understand."
"Don't worry it will all come to you in do time, but it's my turn now." I hear a cell door opening next to me. Her treatment is up. The womans voice sounded so distant, almost like she was talking into a microphone with bad static.
I want to speak to this girl again, but I probably won't, the treatments are getting worse every day. Not many will hold on to their screams any longer.
So, I sit down and wait for her to scream.

Why did it have to be me? They came for me, but why? There were so many people here, how am I connected to them?
I don't want more pain, I don't want the sun to rise tomorrow and give birth to more treatments! I need to get out of here.

Heero...........


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So what do you think? TELL ME! I want to know bad or good! Should I continue? Do keep in mind I'm Dutch so don't mind my spelling! :roll:

But anyway if I do continue here is a tiny peak at chapter 1;
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I wake up starttled. The military boots again. Did they came for me already? They open a door next to me, my right this time. Then the sound of their boots slowly subsides. They brought somebody back! This person is strong.

"I didn't scream."
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So people all review!!!!!

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Interesting...
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There seems to be far too much security to attempt an armed rescue of any kind, even with mobile suits. Even if such an attack were to succede in stopping the opperation, all the prisoners would likely be executed by the time they could be brought to safety. Heero will have to be very deep undercover, and with the help of at least one other Gundam pilot to assist him on the inside. Include ion the next chapter or two some more info as to who these people might be and their intentions/motives/goals for doing what they do. Also include again in the next chapter or two the reaction from Heero and the others, say at Preventer HQ in Lady Une's office or something. Include Zechs's reaction and intentions as to any action he may take to recover Relena if possible.
Keep the person that got back next to Relena alive at least long enough to provide Relena with some understanding as to what is going on.
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