(Sequel) Left in the Dust

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(Sequel) Left in the Dust

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Disclaimer: Oh, if only--- maybe someday. But for now I?ll just have to enjoy my Miroku key chain.

Title: (Sequel) Left in the Dust

Note: as if you didn't notice that this is a sequel, and yes, the first part is somewhere in this forum.

**

Did she think she would get away?

Possibly. A chance- yes, but uh- no, not really.

Heat.

She could feel it- the insistent touch of long slim fingers dragging the damn thing half across the country- of course she could feel it. But- it was so terribly hot.

Ung. Burnt Fingers!

Oh. But did that matter? No. One Thousand and One times- No!

Half conscious- half asleep from the sagging weight across her body, she felt crushed.

Vexed that she had even been manipulated- persuaded to even perform such an ordeal- but who was she to complain.

Nice. Sweet. Of course she would say yes. Had she ever said no?

Well, of course, but- most often. Rug. Her. Trod-over Rug.

Okay. So fingers weren?t burning, but her cheeks were a bright shade of red. Did that count?

?Could you maybe- move a bit faster??

So maybe, possibly, it might have been, her own Stupid-I?m-Right sort-of fault.

No. Never. Not her.

She was Kagome- always on the right, right?

Then.

Was he-?

Yes. Yes, he was. That- that jerk.

Seeing a rock, she aimed that way. A stumble and a curse flew her way.

Good.

So maybe, she wasn?t burning because of the sun.

Her chest- expanding, rising and falling as each ragged breath was taken in- and out. Was she supposed to see the air puffing out on such a hot day?

Glancing to the sun- she glared. Trying to recall whether or not Naraku had acquired any power over the brightly lit orb. If at all possible, the heat seemed to rise with that thought. She could feel it, the neck tie- itchy.

She could always remove it- no, no she couldn?t.

Now with- not with him here.

Although, he was in the position- turning her head to glance behind her briefly- no, he was definitely not in the position to see.

Not that- it exposed much more than where the neck met the rest of the body- oh. Look, a peak of collarbone.

So- freeing herself of the itchy- uh thing. It flew- marvelously- beautiful triple flip with a graceful plop onto the already dusty ground. Well- her landings weren?t usually beautiful either, but-

Insistent pulling- again.

An irritable, ?What?? was clearly tugged from the corner of her mouth.

Pausing- for only a mere second she told herself- turning to see him, her eyes narrowed at the glossy gleam that overtook the usual dark color of his eyes. She knew that look-

Her eyes darted around, searching- for anything that could provoke such a look, but- nothing.

Another frown.

Everything was still- possibly the only things moving were both Kagome and- him.

The small corner of his mouth twitched, a flicker of pink wetting the bottom half of his mouth.

She wanted- if anything- the ability to growl like Inuyasha at that moment.

But she didn?t have the throat- voice box- whatever you damn well call it, and Inuyasha just wasn?t around.

An exasperated sigh broke through- ?What are you looking at??

Surprisingly- his cheeks colored, and his mouth took on what could only be called a sheepish grin. But- he remained silent, his eyes once again turning glassy. Maybe he was, delirious, that bandage on his head did make him look rather pitiful.

Although- she still had suspicions as to how he had- really- received the most likely well-deserved conk on the head.

He couldn?t be all that shaken up from it- but then again, he wouldn?t be flat back on a tarp being dragged by her wonderfully still just as evil horse if he wasn?t, at least a bit.

Yes- tarp, because- she he wasn?t aloud anywhere near her- or her anatomy. At all!

Probation!

The horse at that moment chose to whinny.

But- he had survived many of Sango?s harsh hits to the head in the past- why did he have to obtain real damage- now.

When they were alone.

Except for Beast.

Evil- still evil, but possible turning to the side of good. Ung. For today anyways.

But it had been her fault- the slap across the cheek had done her in. And he was- well, if the slightly drenched in blood wrap around his head was anything to show for what she?d done- then yes. It was her fault.

But- arrogant, full of himself- too much of an ego had blurted out that question.

And- with a reaction more habitual than anything, her palm had struck- hard.

He deserved it.

Really.

Then again- how did one bleed from a slap- it was meant to bruise, but- blood. Cringe. Shudder. Ew.

No, no, not weak Kagome who couldn?t hurt a fly, but who was she to argue. The red was there, bright. Very, very bright- odd.

Shaking the head, her train of thoughts confusing her more than she already was.

Maybe- ?I can see a bend just coming up, we can stop and rest in the shade of the trees.?

Pulling the horse from the slow canter, to even lighter trot, she found herself pulling on the reigns in a signal to stop the horse. A soft snort extracted as she slid as gracefully as she could off the horse. With a quick flip of the reigns, and a twist of her wrist- she pulled the horse over a few steps until a good sized tree- with a not so thick trunk- allowed her to tie the reigns loosely around it?s base.

That should hold it- hopefully.

Watching- somewhat warily- as Miroku lifted himself, bruised, up from the tarp. But he looked none the worst for wear as he strolled over to the next closest tree, seating himself ever so comfortable under the shade of the tree.

A grassy patch- just gleaming beside him- inviting.

The truth was- there were sparsely any trees- odd, it being they were in the middle of a forest. But this was the warring states era- and, it seemed the ground was littered with more stumps than plant life.

So it left her with few options. Either- she slip into the shade and hope the horse wouldn?t drool on her- which, looked very likely to happen, or chance the monk?s hands doing something which would probably find it?s way somewhere in one of her regions- not welcome.

But- he was injured, and he didn?t usually make the same mistake twice- not after a hit like that.

So- taking a chance- she slid into the patch of grass right next to him.

His eyes opening briefly to watch the progress of her smoothing out her skirt as she settled a bit more comfortably.

Fidgeting- and slightly nervous- a jolt rocked her body at the quiet words whispered to her.

Looking quickly- a bit of the surprise still shown on her face- she replied with a quick- ?What was that??

?I?m sorry- about earlier.?

He couldn?t possible- no, not Miroku. He never apologized.

?I shouldn?t have done that- especially knowing?- glancing at her with the same odd gleam from earlier-?that you weren?t entirely comfortable on the horse.?

She waited curiously to see if he was going to say more, but he kept watching her, his lips unmoving as the pause between them seemed to stretch.

Then glancing away, he closed his eyes yet again.

Oh. Well. That was strange.

And then- the innocent remark sliding from her mouth- a mistake- ?Don?t worry about it.?

As if waiting for those four words, he turned to her- eyes two-thirds open as he gazed at her with a quizzical look gracing his fine features. Then the smooth roundness of his cheeks bunched as his lips stretched into a kind smile- his arm snaking out as he took her small hand in his larger.

?Friends??

It was an odd question- as if he had been worried by the past event.

Hadn?t he done those things to her before? Hadn?t she always responded in kind? He couldn?t possibly be worried about there friendship.

But- the smile on his face seemed pure and innocent- the hand holding hers in a gesture of one only being friendly- in a platonic sort of way.

At least- that?s what she had been lead to believe- nodding, a smile returned. A small sight seemed to escape him- one of relief.

But the look quickly left as an all-together different look took over. Something. Was. Wrong. Very, very wrong- he was not- repeat- not supposed to be smiling at her like that. It almost seemed predatory- something she would only ever associate with Inuyasha, but he was- if possible- looking quite feral, and ready for a meal.

Ravinous. Ung. No. Bad word choice.

But her body was- heating, in the hot sun- which wasn?t exactly supposed to be happening in the sun. Body- traitor. The wild beat of her heart, faster- harder against her ribcage. A wild flutter in the middle of her stomache- chest constricting, throat drying- eyes widening. She was very much in- lack of- control of her body. And it was slowly demanding- something.

Which, she was very certain, involved Miroku in some way- but all he was doing was looking at her in that same strange predator- he hunter, she hunted sort-of way. And it was doing things to her body that had taken more than a look from Inuyasha to accomplish such a reaction.

Strange.

And then- and then-

Oh.

The tree was working against her- yes- and hot breath. And- a very comfortable warmth was wrapping around her as she now found Miroku above and before her.

How had that happened?

His hands- trapping her- the rest of his body like a cocoon. His lips were a scant few centimeters away from her own, his breath now mingling with hers as he breathed her name.

The thought of ketchup entered her mind very briefly- quickly erasing as her eyes seemed to focus on his lips alone- wondering why they seemed so far away when they were so close.

Unsure of who had initiated the movement first, she soon found herself- eyes closed- as his lips met with her own. Soft- nibbling- intoxicating. Dragging. Sliding across her own moist lips.

She could feel them moving slowly down, trailing across the expanse of her skin that had been exposed in the hot heat of the day- her body flaring from the taunting scrapes of his teeth as he brought his mouth from her lips to the edge of her collarbone just peaking out of her cotton top.

And although for once- he had the perfect opportunity to grope and touch her without being reprimanded, he kept the rest of his body away. Keeping his body inches from her own, leaning his weight on the knees straddling her waist, and the arms keeping her body against the tree. Nothing touching her but the soft flesh of his lips and the brush of his hair against the end of her chin.

It was very tempting to move closer, to feel more than just those teasing lips on her- but a very wet sucking sound interrupted the both of them- freezing them.

The seconds ticked by, as Kagome warily looked down into her lap, to see what had exactly plopped into her lap.

Glancing- back and forth between Miroku?s innocent face, and his bandage in her lap- the brief thought that had flickered in her mind was brought back to the surface.

Ketchup. She could smell it. And by the looks of the bandage, and Miroku?s cheek, it was what had been the very bright red that had soaked through.

Not for the first time that day- her eyes narrowed, and feel of hard slap was delivered across Miroku?s face.

That- that jerk!

**

Note: This isn?t edited- so, I?m not sure how it sounds. And- I admit I haven?t read the first Left in the Dust since--- forever. So, hopefully I didn?t mess this up. Spur of the moment I tell you! But I had fun wit this.

I think I?ve resolved that- after I finish a few of my stories- that I will stick to my one-shots, because- they?re so much easier to write, and I?m lazy.

Oh, and please review.

(took me 37 minutes- ha.)
Hold my tongue...
Slip off the sound...
I feel my feet...
To find the ground...
[This Busy Monster]

I kill beans with my forceps... *har, har*

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Post by Kaili Charmer »

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAA!!! This is too funny. Now again, i'm not much of a kagome/miroku fan...in fact, not at all...but hey! This is hilarious!
~*Kai*~

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Fan of pairings: Heero/Relena, Van/Hitomi, Kyo/Tohru, InuYasha/Kagome

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