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Suffocation (Drabble #10)

Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 9:40 pm
by SimplyTurquoise
Disclaimer: Maybe in an alternate reality...

Title: Suffocation
Word Count: 118
Rating: PG
Pairing: 1xR

It?s only a game--- nothing more.

The feel of lips dragging---

Everything would be all right--- just as long as you followed the rules.

Hard body against soft--- can he hear her heartbeat?

But if you were to break those rules---

Ragged breath; hands tearing clothes---

The ropes will tighten---

She could feel it--- breaking.

The handcuffs will clamp shut---

Is this how it was supposed to be?

The dagger will be unsheathed---

Ragged breath hot against her skin.

But not to worry---

But where was Heero--- where was her valiant knight?

You?ll be fine.

She wanted to scream--- she wanted to struggle---

After all---

But Relena couldn?t.

It?s only a game---

Because--- she couldn?t breath.

Nothing more.

(Note: *cough* I only had to mention handcuffs, right?!!? Ungh... review!!!!)

Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 9:56 pm
by AngelOfDeath
Sad! Where WAS Heero?

Yarg. Good job though. :)

Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2003 10:09 pm
by Andrea
I am confused...Where the HECK is Heero!?!

hmm... Anyway, I loved it... love your use of words... love how you write *squeals happily to self* I love you!!!

:oops: ... :eek: ----> :lol:

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 10:48 am
by Kari
Good job!!!!!!! :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
But where is Heero is he 'the hard body' as you write??
Kari a.k.a. Meligoof :bounce: :bounce: :salute: :-P

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 11:43 am
by HeerosChick1842
Where is Heero? Oh, well. Good Story Though! But Where is Heero? :bounce:

Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2003 8:00 am
by Morrighan
:eek: What?!?!?!?! Where's Heero!!! I'm confused...

Great job, though! :D

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 9:35 pm
by bookworm
Where the HECK is Heero!?!
Yeah, where was he? Sequel, ST. Sequel.

Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2004 4:53 pm
by sweet_me_beajai
*looks around dumbly*

huh?

*blush*