Suffocation (Drabble #10)

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Suffocation (Drabble #10)

Post by SimplyTurquoise »

Disclaimer: Maybe in an alternate reality...

Title: Suffocation
Word Count: 118
Rating: PG
Pairing: 1xR

It?s only a game--- nothing more.

The feel of lips dragging---

Everything would be all right--- just as long as you followed the rules.

Hard body against soft--- can he hear her heartbeat?

But if you were to break those rules---

Ragged breath; hands tearing clothes---

The ropes will tighten---

She could feel it--- breaking.

The handcuffs will clamp shut---

Is this how it was supposed to be?

The dagger will be unsheathed---

Ragged breath hot against her skin.

But not to worry---

But where was Heero--- where was her valiant knight?

You?ll be fine.

She wanted to scream--- she wanted to struggle---

After all---

But Relena couldn?t.

It?s only a game---

Because--- she couldn?t breath.

Nothing more.

(Note: *cough* I only had to mention handcuffs, right?!!? Ungh... review!!!!)
Hold my tongue...
Slip off the sound...
I feel my feet...
To find the ground...
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Post by AngelOfDeath »

Sad! Where WAS Heero?

Yarg. Good job though. :)
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Post by Andrea »

I am confused...Where the HECK is Heero!?!

hmm... Anyway, I loved it... love your use of words... love how you write *squeals happily to self* I love you!!!

:oops: ... :eek: ----> :lol:

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Post by Kari »

Good job!!!!!!! :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
But where is Heero is he 'the hard body' as you write??
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Post by HeerosChick1842 »

Where is Heero? Oh, well. Good Story Though! But Where is Heero? :bounce:
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Post by Morrighan »

:eek: What?!?!?!?! Where's Heero!!! I'm confused...

Great job, though! :D
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Post by bookworm »

Where the HECK is Heero!?!
Yeah, where was he? Sequel, ST. Sequel.
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Post by sweet_me_beajai »

*looks around dumbly*

huh?

*blush*
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