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Exposed (drabble #8)

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2003 7:49 am
by Loyce
This one caught me on the way into work this morning. Nothing spectacular.

Count: 97 words.
Rating: G (yeah, I know I'm shocked too)
Title: Exposed

?You?ve got to be kidding me.?

Relena?s laugh washed over him and warmed his chilled skin.

His eyes scanned their surroundings. ?Tell me again why people do this.?

?Because it?s fun.?

?But without any clothes??

?It?s called skinny dipping for a reason.? She stood up to reveal her naked body. ?If you don?t want to join me, you could sit there and watch.?

Instead of answering, he took a deep breath and plunged into the lake. The frigid water stole the breath from his lungs and he sputtered when he broke through the surface.

?Shit, that?s cold!?

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2003 11:09 am
by Andrea
HAhahaha!! It's not hard... :oops: .... to imagine Heero skinny dipping.... Never saw that one coming, anyway. Cute!

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2003 11:11 am
by raine_yuy
Woohoo!!!

I believe this is also a "first" drabble for you? Or is it? I can't keep track anymore.

Anyway, that was awesome. It kept me grinning till the end. And yes, i was very surprised at the rating. lol. Still, there is that subtle hint there of major on-coming lemon. Darn drabble, ne? Only allows you a few chosen words so that you can't elaborate on the good stuff. Haha.

Great job, hon! Now, MORE!

Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2003 8:31 pm
by Morrighan
:lol: *snicker* He-he-he..... That was hilarious!!!! I can't get over that!! ^_^

Great job, Loyce!!

Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2003 2:08 am
by RDP
Haha! Heero...so silly. *_* Go Rel! :-P Nice drabble, Loyce. :)

Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 7:07 pm
by sailorDH
Haha... nice!

~imagines the look on Heero's face~

lol!!

Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 10:36 pm
by Kaili Charmer
hehehe...that was cute! :razz:

Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 12:27 pm
by bookworm
Heero going into the water after seeing Relena's body...of course. 8)