This one caught me on the way into work this morning. Nothing spectacular.
Count: 97 words.
Rating: G (yeah, I know I'm shocked too)
Title: Exposed
?You?ve got to be kidding me.?
Relena?s laugh washed over him and warmed his chilled skin.
His eyes scanned their surroundings. ?Tell me again why people do this.?
?Because it?s fun.?
?But without any clothes??
?It?s called skinny dipping for a reason.? She stood up to reveal her naked body. ?If you don?t want to join me, you could sit there and watch.?
Instead of answering, he took a deep breath and plunged into the lake. The frigid water stole the breath from his lungs and he sputtered when he broke through the surface.
?Shit, that?s cold!?
Exposed (drabble #8)
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Exposed (drabble #8)
Breaker of Contracts
Lover of Secondary Pairings
and overall Mistress of Mayhem
"I'm a Bitch
I'm a Tease
I'm a Goddess on my knees
When you're hurt, when you suffer
I'm your Angel undercover"
-- Meredith Brooks
Lover of Secondary Pairings
and overall Mistress of Mayhem
"I'm a Bitch
I'm a Tease
I'm a Goddess on my knees
When you're hurt, when you suffer
I'm your Angel undercover"
-- Meredith Brooks
.... to imagine Heero skinny dipping.... Never saw that one coming, anyway. Cute!-
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Woohoo!!!
I believe this is also a "first" drabble for you? Or is it? I can't keep track anymore.
Anyway, that was awesome. It kept me grinning till the end. And yes, i was very surprised at the rating. lol. Still, there is that subtle hint there of major on-coming lemon. Darn drabble, ne? Only allows you a few chosen words so that you can't elaborate on the good stuff. Haha.
Great job, hon! Now, MORE!
I believe this is also a "first" drabble for you? Or is it? I can't keep track anymore.
Anyway, that was awesome. It kept me grinning till the end. And yes, i was very surprised at the rating. lol. Still, there is that subtle hint there of major on-coming lemon. Darn drabble, ne? Only allows you a few chosen words so that you can't elaborate on the good stuff. Haha.
Great job, hon! Now, MORE!
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*snicker* He-he-he..... That was hilarious!!!! I can't get over that!! ^_^Great job, Loyce!!
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Haha! Heero...so silly. 
Go Rel! Nice drabble, Loyce. 
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