(Poem) Letting Go

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(Poem) Letting Go

Post by Morrighan »

Dedicated to: Chris, the first love of my life. No matter what I may go through, one piece of my heart is still yours.


Letting Go

It pains me so much
To make this decision
But I have no other alternative
Other than to fall into despair
To be led on false dreams and hopes

I?m letting you go

You have to honor of being the first
The first to have claimed my heart
I never knew what love was
Until I fell in love with you

But you never knew
Such secrets are better never known
It would have shattered our friendship
Plunged me into desolation
Shredded my heart
Into uncountable pieces
I don?t know how I could live with that

That?s why I?m letting you go

But that won?t stop me from loving you
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Post by Lara Winner »

Awww... *snifs* I feel you pain sweetie. *hugs* Lovely poem.
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Post by athena »

*hugs*

Thank you so much for PMing me and letting me know that you had this poem up. It's so beautiful!

I'm really glad that you have some of the same feelings I have, makes me feel less alone. I'm lettting go, too, of my first love, and its so hard. Your poem and advice has helped me a LOT though, morri!

Us goddess' stick together! *sniffs* Thank you again! Your poems are always so beautiful and touching. Keep it up!
Shredded my heart
Into uncountable pieces
I don?t know how I could live with that
*sobs* Perfect! Are you sure you're not reading my mind??
"The point is, you see," said Ford, "that there is no point in driving yourself mad to stop yourself going mad. You might just as well give in and save your sanity for later."

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We'll kiss just as before
Happy we'll be beyond the sea
And never again I'll go sailing - Beyond the Sea

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Post by Andrea »

Heart wrenching and beautiful... such depth in your words that I can't help but feel your pain...

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Post by cherryflavored1R »

Wow, this is great. I know how you feel, a little all too well. This was so powerful, and when you look at the poem, you spoke very plainly, but you still got a huge message across. I am quite impressed.

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Post by pilot03 »

Heart wrenching and beautiful... such depth in your words that I can't help but feel your pain...
:( I think a tear drop would say it all. *gives hug*
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Post by Chibi-sitter »

Oh Morrighan I soooo LOVE your poems!!! *BIG hugs* :salute:
This one is just awwwwww lovely.

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