Destinies Hand Chapter 1:Part 1;Fin;The Escape

[Hotkitty]

AN Just so you know if anyone was curious this is rated PG 13 but thats only for mild language.
So please id really appreciate some replies and i have the next chapter in writing and ready to post!!
I just need a good response to prompt me!!

Part 1; Fin The Escape

Fin gazed up at the two moons as their light shone upon the glistening lake.

She tightened her cape and pulled her dagger from the sheath which was strapped securely to the belt around her waist. The jewel on her forehead shimmered slightly as she stealthily made her way down the vines hanging from the arched balcony.

As she dropped slowly down the vine she felt her foot slip on the jagged marble walls, Fin flipped round to regain her balance and missed the fall by a few inches.

She felt the wet grass beneath her small bare feet. Fin sat down for a few moments to regain her breath, that had been a close one, she'd nearly fallen this time.

Fin glanced up at the large clock which could be see clearly from the town square which was so far away.

Eleven thirty, the guards would be on patrol at quarter too, just enough time to escape.

Fin sprinted across the gardens keeping an eye out for any guards who had decided to go on patrol early. No sign of anyone, she continued across the widespread lawn her bare feet brushing against the damp grass.

It had rained recently that was why there was such a cold damp smell in the air.

As she reached the gate she stopped for a moment at a tall oak tree to pull on her shoes and get some air.

Suddenly she heard some voices, instinctively Fin flattened herself against the trunk of the thick tree staying in the shadows as to not get spotted.

As soon as she was sure they were on the other side of the lawn she tiptoed to the gate with more care.

As she reached the gate she gripped the cold metal and slid her leather shoes into one of the edges. She then found each gap by carefully tracing her fingers across the hard metal and carefully climbed the gate.

This was the easy part, now the real challenge awaited once she'd climbed the gate. That was where the danger of being caught was stronger. Fin nervously swung herself over the gate and settled herself down on the other side.

She wrapped her cloak more securely around her shoulders and made a dart towards the town square.

Just as she had expected she could now hear shouting behind the gate. She heard the gate clang shut behind her and the sounds of low voices and rushing footsteps.

Fin didn't dare look back but continued at a sprint down the old pathway leading to the village.

She could hear the voices getting louder and quickened her pace. By what she could tell they were chasing her and she could hear their heavy footsteps.

Without looking where she was going ran down the path determined not to get caught this time.

Just as she turned the corner she bumped into something hard. Fin stumbled back and looked towards the figure blocking her path.

"Reusphina Delmonte betrothed of the New Emperor I presume," said the figure.

Fin looked closely at him and swallowed hard at the sight of the crest securing his cape, the crest of the Emperor...

TBC.

A/N Hope u enjoyed and please do review!!!!!

[Winged~Trinity]

That's great!! i love the way you wrote fin's characture!!
you got to keep it going!!!it rocks
ps. sorry for the late reply!!