(Poem) Mercy

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Lara Winner
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(Poem) Mercy

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Mercy



Stab me again with sharp words

I want to care


This ache is blinding


Release me?


Make it go away

Say something sugar sweet


Lie

If you must I won?t care


It?s dying,

Deep inside where you can't see


Am I cast away?


Done with your toy

Used broken plaything


Compensate me if you will


Have mercy?


Mercy...




A.N.- Well, this gives you a peek into my darker side and it only gets worse from here. Poetry is how I vent. To those who can relate to this, need I say more?

Thank you for taking the time to read my therapy session. *hugs*
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Post by Morrighan »

Oh my gosh, I totally know what you mean! Poetry is how I vent, too! :D

Needless to say, I've felt the same way sometimes...

Wonderfully expressed, Lara!
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Post by cherryflavored1R »

This is very good, and you make your message clear without spelling it out for the reader. Great poetry.

Good job ^___^

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